Shojin- Very straight forward and simple story wise but it worked. Art seemed a tad rushed but was still solid and told the story without any question as to what was happening. And a week is one hell of a tough deadline. A good entry overall.
Rtv!- I was really impressed, great angles, solid artwork, and a really interesting story. I liked that I knew what was happening despite not having read any of the other comics (yet). Looks and reads great man.
Good luck to you both!
Shojin- that was short and sweet. I actually had the same idea in the beginning. I loved the Rtv cameo and i must say he makes a pretty bad ass cowboy/bandit. I'm of jealous the compositions and angles on page one.
It's immediately clear what the setting is and whats going on. The dialogue at the end will be remembered by me forever, that's something i'd say too. hahaha.
Also great how you had Fred in there continued from the previous story. I''m a fan of recurring characters.
Wish i could've given Wyatt more screentime. Originally i had him have a flashback of when he first got his pistols for his birthday, did some target practice on cans and bottles. His first moving target would be a small blue ape.
I didn't plan on killing him either.
I've had fun with this.!
Nice Stuff Shojin... Looking forward to seeing your future battles.
Great job RTV, It looks like you are really enjoying putting this story-line toghether... Rock on mi hermano!
Great job you two!
Shojin, I'm really starting to enjoy the Void old west universe! Entertaining read, keep it up!
RTV SHIT. man that's great stuff for one week, those colors were really nice! even with the last uncolored page, high marks on quality. I'm really enjoying the plot unfold and the relations of the monkey bros add a lot of depth to the story...your human faces, except for the panel with the wanted posters, tend to get a bit wonky compared to how well everything else is rendered, that's my only real crit. boss work.
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