LeFred, I liked the unique approach to the text, it kept things interesting, the laughing clam was an amazing characterization, both personalities were great,really fun read!
Tofu, sweet concept, I really loved the comic character vs. comic artist scenario, came across really well, hope to see more comics from you.
Thanks guys.
Yeah, the text is defenetly not thought out or worked on properly... Lack of time and sleep and all that. I'll try better next time.
Coatl, what did you feel was wrong with with my layouts? Because I went over them several times to make sure they read properly and I want to know if there is something I just don't understand about it.
Le Fred I enjoyed your character. Infact he felt less of a self insert and more of a charicature. Your Use of color is also really good but I say lower the line thickness for your text. Also work on your panel layouts. think of them as a composition within a composition. I can see where this go. It'll be nice if you all out with your character like Neil Patrick Harris in Harold and Kumar or Do more dream realm things. I felt like this whole comic was like within a japanese inspired dream which is fun. Love the colors but always experiement.
Tofu, I love the shift in this more angular style. Angie is right, work on the line work. and if you mess up I recommend you redo whatever you messed up on, make sure it's the right size and photoshop it into the page.
I know you had a week to do this but make sure you check that your figures and objects conform to the style you're using so that everything feels tighter.
I like this character. i can see him being the manly man type.
I like to see him roaming the streets as a detective or helping people. maybe have times when he feels doubts and then tries to wash it down with alcohol.
Le Fred-I liked the playful color scheme you had here and the action sequence was very nice. I especially liked where he pretty much said fuck it and started shooting Clamuel. I almost felt like the text shouldn't have even been there. Because for one, the text was pretty difficult to read so I didn't really even bother to look at it. And for another, the action was clear and easy enough to read without it.
Tofubeast-welcome to Void! I hope you stick around! I think this was a good start for you, I liked the interaction between the characters. I think this would have looked a lot better had you not used such thick outlines on things.
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