Great to see your first battle, neon!
I'll echo what kent said and say I like your style and method of shading, and I do like the expressions you gave the characters. The paneling and pacing I particularly liked, so hope to see some of that in future comics.
I believe that there were too many close up head shots in this comic though, it'd be nice to maybe distance the characters away a bit more next time. The ending was a kind of abrupt for my tastes. Sonny falls from a high point in the sky, then suddenly just stops I guess. Did he land safely? Did that Spirit orb save him? It was confusing and could have been better explained with a maybe two more panels showing how he landed.
Overall, it was alright. Hope to see more from you!
wow...thanks fox! bruce willis rocks..the fifth element and die hard were sweet! those action movies really clean up at the box office and everyone involved gets to laugh the whole way to the bank;) glad you enjoyed it Mrnoitaull and stay tuned for more monochromactic madness!!
I'm gonna say this ahead of time but due to family things, I might not submit by the deadline but if I don't I'll submit as a BB.
Still, it doesn't excuse the fact that I took 5 weeks to do this, and it's irresponsible. However, I'm gonna take the heat.
I figured out your problem Neon Prime. Rename all of your files, the uploader doesn't accept special characters so the "#" in the filename isn't allowing you to upload the pages.
Neon Prime your pages don't work, if they're too large the uploader won't take them.
*edit-still broken. You can review your upload under Manager:Upload a comic and you should be able to review your upload there.
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