holy shit! TIE!! I'm glad both of you got into the next round.
RTV, I can honestly say I'm starting go get interested in this new direction your story is going.
Hey awesome! Someone knew what i was trying to do at the end. Yes Rtv comics were never really in chronological order.
I've had some severe health issues which turned this into a half SDT entry. 4 days drawn, 24 hours coloured. I've made full use of the grace period, but i was one minute too late to upload the page that would've made the story a bit more clear.
I just wanted to have Ponch be bad ass and bring down Rtv's entire army down by himself. (as Rtv did to the VCPD)
I didn't know what to do with Rtv either when my story plummeted during the ATN so i ended it at the same part where it made sence the last time. Hey, i had to bail somewhere.
Qyzex - I was really entertained by Rtv's phone conversation and how you parodied his speech entirely. Inedible...hahahahaha, jesus dude.
I like that Ponch has a sence of justice taking revenge. In my comic i wanted to use the same reason but didn't know if that was part of his character. I gave him the jacket cuz it was supposed to be snowing...changed my mind when the cgi covered up his coolness. Funny how in real life i actually had a phone convo on the bus with my girl about a vacation one day before deadline. Are you Agent Smith?
When the driver got hit i almost shit my pants laughing at Rtv's reaction. The comic felt cartoony with a serious air surrounding it. If that makes sence.
Ponch Pomperelli is on my top three fav. characters now.
I've had a shitload of fun!
Thanks for reading and comments. Hope i get back on track in future comics.
Qyzex: Your line work is pretty good and so is the style, The flow of the action just needs to loosen up a bit.
Rtv: I must say, I do like the fact that your continuing the story from the fight you had with tdkgunghoul; it adds that much more depth to the character. Also Buzz being prego, nice twist.
Good job guys, keep up the great work.
Qyzex: Great art and writing for the majority. The action feels very stiff, though. It looks in the last panel like he's bleeding from his stomach, but what caused that? Or is that blood from his glass-shredded arm?
Rtv!: Loving the vibrance and movement of the characters. Something about it reminds me of Peter Chung, except that I actually like it XD It's a pity we don't get closure on that fight though.
Great job both of you!
RTV:
Improvment over the last round. Shame we again didn't see someone else than minions fight. With this plot it feels as if it requires a powerhouse for RTV to come out, but then again RTV isn't a character that is a powerhouse himself.
Qyzex:
It's solid for Ponch, but RTV feels very stupid to me - hits the driver and then panics, even in Void's standard. I'm actually satisfied with the story, and it's funny that Ponch "lost" in it.
Qyz: Dig the style, man. Some of the marker shades got a bit messy, but overall this was a very solid looking comic. Loved your sense of humor- as always- especially the "inedible" bit. Not much to say for critiquing other than it felt a bit short *haha this is ironic coming from me* and could have done with more closure or at least a "to be continued." Felt like there was more build up than follow-through. Certainly not a bad comic by any means, though. :)
RTV: I really dig your inks/colors and sense of action. Felt as though your comic fell a bit flat too, though. Not entirely sure of the plot, but it was still a fun read. Nice sense of humor, you did a good job with Qyz's character. But yeah... not a lot to say 'cause I'm not really sure what the whole thing was about. Looked pretty, though!
Nice work on both sides. Qyzex, I really liked how you got your joke from last time to carry over so well into this comic. Ponch's attitude about it was quite funny. Though, I think this comic lacked the energy of your last one and was a little less fun. Ponch kind of reminds me of Johnny Bravo in a way. He's a really fun character.
Rtv!, I love the way you drew Ponch's punch perm. It was beautiful! Great fighting and I really liked the bright white hit effects. I'd still like to get our rematch on in this tournament so hopefully we both last long enough to make that happen. I want to know how RTV! got grenaded in the face! That's not a crit, just a comment. Great work, guys!
Nice work from both of you, quite solid action Qyzex, a lot more solid than I've seen in the past from you, so that's nice. Like the style you've got going. I was sort of disappointed that this didn't have more of an ending or payoff though.
Similarly, rtv!, nice execution man, but I wasn't really sure what was going on plotwise, and it didn't really come to a close.
Really would have like to see a full plot arc from both of you with resolution rather than just a fight that didn't really fight in anywhere or resolve too well.
Haha, wow, you made Ponch so much more of a badass than I ever would! That was pretty cool! And I really fuckin' dig the jacket you gave him, too! Sweet battle, dude
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