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Nameless vs Rtv! | Heavyweight 2011 Round 1

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Nameless vs Rtv! | Heavyweight 2011 Round 1
By Rtv!
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Rtv!
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Final Score: 5.88
Nameless vs Rtv! | Heavyweight 2011 Round 1
By Njhinesjr
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Nameless
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Final Score: 0.00

Comments (28)

Darius Corry's avatar
Darius Corry
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13 years ago
It almost feels like RTV knew Njhinesjr wasn't going to come through.

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Kuro
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13 years ago
Face structure was looking tighter here. nice setup but that's really all it was.

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Wolcik
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13 years ago
If the first colorful page is a set up, you could put some text there - just a quick "near future" or "RTV vs Nameless" would make it feel less empty. Watercolory greys gives more depth, but you should also clean whites better - I don't know whenever it's a scanner problem or you just didn't had the time, but second page has a panel with only head and 3 sheets of paper flying around and cleaning his one wouldn't be so hard :P I know that fourth wall breaking dialoque suppose to be funny, and it might work with all other characters being silent, but I can't shake off the feeling like it was due lack of better explanation to short story. I know you can make a great and complex story, which hurts when RTV breaks the character by saying fourth wall breaking comment - at least that's my opinion.

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beardedMenace
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13 years ago
Ah man, serious case of blue balls here, RTV. But nice looking, anyway!

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Dimension
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13 years ago
Rtv, you do have some very nice inks, but I think you could mess with the contrast a bit more to make them look cleaner. There's not a whole lot to crit story-wise so I won't touch on that. Any who, good luck in the next round!

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Qyzex
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13 years ago
Man, I have to agree with Jho here, you have strong stand-alone blacks. I loved them

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sheldon
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13 years ago
RTV, your comic just SCREAMS Wu Tang Clan. Even when dudes are getting copped up they're all standin round lookin cool. Vary up your angles, bro. Great first page though. Super moody.

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Fetus Man
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13 years ago
Hahah, good one rtv! I agree with jho about the b+w of yours, i haven't seen straight lines in a long time from you and you've gotten really good at them. Can't wait for us to get matched up again ;) Nicely done! Njhinetc. sorry charlie~

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jho
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13 years ago
I have to say i like your b/w stuff more than your coloured stuff, they look way clearer and readable.

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Iketeruguy
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13 years ago
RTV! That was some great mood building and then RTV opens his mouth and it was hilarious. Would've liked to seen finished fight, but it was cool none the less!

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Iketeruguy
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13 years ago
Almost made it a whole round with no defaults. It's cool man.

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The One Dark Knight
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13 years ago
DEFAULT ON FIRST ROUND I AM DISSAPOINT

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alberto311
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13 years ago
hahahaha...okay that was pretty funny... good job RTV, Nj..... I'm sad.

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Angie
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13 years ago
Make sure not to save your files at maximum quality RTV! Keep your files all below 500KB and you shouldn't have any issues with uploads tonight.



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Njhinesjr
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13 years ago
Wolcik: Njhinesjr don't try to hide behind awesme linework, do some solid plot like RTV will :) Good luck guys!
I'll try not to hold back this time.

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Njhinesjr
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13 years ago
Wolcik: Njhinesjr don't try to hide behind awesme linework, do some solid plot like RTV will :) Good luck guys!
I'll try not to hold back this time.

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Angie
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13 years ago
Don't disappoint! Looking forward to this

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carlito
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13 years ago
Man. This is a really good match up.

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Iketeruguy
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13 years ago
I really like Nameless' new design! I'm excited to see you guys throw down.


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Wolcik
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13 years ago
Njhinesjr don't try to hide behind awesme linework, do some solid plot like RTV will :) Good luck guys!

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Njhinesjr
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13 years ago
Nameless: You must be the one they call RTV! I have heard of you. RTV!: Who the FUKK are you!!?? Nameless: Ah! You must have been expecting Goujin...

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alberto311
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13 years ago
Congrats and good luck guys..... I'm rooting for you both! Hahahahhahahah



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Chia
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13 years ago
I expect nothing but a bloody mess from you two. <3