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Billy Club vs Johnny Gord vs Portobello! vs Winter | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 2

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• All-Together Now! 2010

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Billy Club vs Johnny Gord vs Portobello! vs Winter | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 2

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haven: Hey, this was a pretty nice entry! Really wicked action in this comic. I'm absolutely in love with Gord on page 4 pulling his knives out, really marvelous posing on your part. The way he slams down on some mutant the next page is absolutely cool too. I'm really liking the 'splatter' there. You have terrific movement and pacing with regards to the story, as well. It really picks up from where your last comic ended and it really could just continue from where you left off by removing that 'to be continued' text. You cut right to the chase and the action is really satisfying and reminds me of the game 'Left 4 Dead'. I would love to see this kind of action from you more, cause I think you're getting a knack for it. I think your props could use a little work, though. The gun feels a little phoned in, but guns are man-made objects can be tricky, so I can understand that. I also think a little more variation or shading with the grays would help enhance this piece as well. Opponents. This was really lacking in that field. This comic would be a solid A if it was a Beyond Battle, but this isn't gonna work out next round for you, if you keep this up. If we had covered up the name of your opponents, it literally could have been anyone you showed, so make sure you devote more time to including them, not just cameos! All in all, I think you got a bit lucky here, but this was seriously a terrific comic. I'm really excited to see your semi-finals entry and I hope you fix your issues to make us an MG-class effort! Vain: Bummer. I hope we see something nice from you again, soon.

FissionMailed: Haha nice comic dude. Maybe would have liked to see more of your opponents in this, but hey - they pulled a no show so no worries there I guess haha! Good luck in the next round bro :) He covered opponents from both of his rounds, so that counts for something XD

Haha nice comic dude. Maybe would have liked to see more of your opponents in this, but hey - they pulled a no show so no worries there I guess haha! Good luck in the next round bro :)

Haven-I think that the cover really showed that your work is a bit stronger with color. Since you generally only use one linewidth, color would allow you to better dictate where the eye moves and help separate objects better than gray toning can do. I'm enjoying the story, I'd just like to see you up the quality on the next comic.

Cover is the best :) I see you try your best to put Awesome in there XD I still don't get who this dead guy is... Showing all All-Togheter characters and leaving with cliff-hanger was a nice set up for next round.

another default...BOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!

I really enjoyed the funeral scene at the beginning - Portobello! and Johnny make a strange team, but they should definitely team up more often.

I'm not quite sure what the hell is going on, but it makes me laugh.

Default. ACK! Haven, that was short but sweet. The action and the back to back teamwork felt like those buddy comedy movies but with less slapstick. Nice. I like how you continued from the previous round. Awesome cover too. Calm on the eyes, yet bad ass! The grey tones worked well in this comic. I think you could go a bit more extreme with it on the bricks on the last page, but that's a personal preference. Maybe i'll run into you in the next round.

haha in all seriousness it's not up yet since I'm waiting on someone that had problems getting it uploaded. It should be up soon though!

angieness: haven: wtf this is taking so long! i have work in an hour and i want to read battles! no fun! I'll never put the comics up now Haven. Thanks for ruining Christmas! but we're not even at thanksgiving yet! GGAAAAHHHHHH

haven: wtf this is taking so long! i have work in an hour and i want to read battles! no fun! I'll never put the comics up now Haven. Thanks for ruining Christmas!

wtf this is taking so long! i have work in an hour and i want to read battles! no fun!