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Ashley Longhorn vs Flintlock vs Merk vs Miette | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 1

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Ashley Longhorn vs Flintlock vs Merk vs Miette | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 1

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Endjoi: Hey, it's cool to see you do stuff again! You've got some pretty blacks going on and I always like solving mazes. Looking at page one, I think you should try getting some white ink! That black background you had going on for Estrella would have looked better if you didn't have to make room for your text. Maybe look at getting some white ink so you could write it out yourself? I like your little people and the art is very cute. However, I felt that this comic wasn't a real good show of what you could really do. It feels like maybe you didn't have enough time or perhaps you put it off for too long? (I know what that's like!) I hope that next round for you will be a stronger showing, however! Qyzex: Aw, too bad you didn't finish, man! This comic was starting out really nice. You've got some really nice backgrounds and blacks going on here, the art looks great. I noticed you're grasping speed lines a little better, because the ones you used on page 2 look really good. Even without text, the characters do speak a lot of emotion through your faces and your posing is really tops here. I think one of the things about your style that bugs me is the way you make motion with those really broad lines for motion. I think it doesn't do you any favors drawing it that way, it just ends up making your people look blocky. It's really too bad you didn't get to finish this, because I was looking forward to your entry most of all, I think. Maybe this can be picked up at a later date for you, because it's very cool looking.