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Billy Club vs General Misconduct vs Ghost Revolver vs Winter | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 1

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• All-Together Now! 2010

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Billy Club vs General Misconduct vs Ghost Revolver vs Winter | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 1

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Vain: It's great to see you use Billy Club finally. You did a really nice job here and it was cool to have him take center stage for this story. Your simple grays here were a good choice, they really enhanced these nice blacks you used for this story. The backgrounds were good and everything here worked. I am, however, not a fan of your use of such drastically large 'cut-outs' for your characters here. It feels really weird and looks just as weird to separate them from the background like you did. It looks like you pasted them into their world with these large white cut outs. However, this was a very entertaining comic nonetheless and I can't wait to see your next round submission! MichealHarris: You didn't do too bad for it being unfinished! I felt for such a large 'empty' room it looks really good and fulfills a lot of stuff that rooms have that people forget about. Your story set up is interesting and you did a nice job with these blacks. Everything read clearly and it was pretty nice to look at here. Although, I noticed that some objects grew and shrank in this comic, specifically the General's desk. It either extended or shortened as the comic went on, which kind of threw me off when I noticed it specifically on the last page. Your faces all still feel very much the same, still. Same shape, same nose, everything. The only real separation between Winter, The Hostess, Ghost Revolver, Jane Blonde, Billy Club, and General Misconduct, is that they're wearing different things, carry different hairstyles, or have pronounced eyelashes or not. I think you need to work on improving variation in your faces, as opposed to just having other pieces of these characters be different. However, I liked where this fight was going. I wouldn't mind seeing this finished later on.

Vain, not bad for a two week match. The grey tones really help the mood of the comic. Nice angles and facial expressions. That cocktail mix sequence was pretty cool, the highlight for me was Billy storming the club. Felt like watching a cartoon. Keep it up! Mr Harris - I like yer smoothl/sharp linework, it's so clean and don''t need any line width. On the last panel of page 2 your opponents have these black dog like noses (like there''s no flesh around them) Is that on purpose or just part of the style? Despite the abrupt ending it didn't feel unfinished at all. I haven't forgotten about our battle. I will fight you next depending on how far i get in the tournament if your still interested. Good work fellas! Keep it up, i'll hopefully meet you at the finals!

Sorry about that, Vain. My bad!

i really enjpyed mchales entery even though its not finished to me it feels like it doesnt need muchg more. im not sure if it was a deliberate mistake but vain is my me when im on void and winter is my character .your comc was one of my favs from the tourney i love your anotomey and your story had feels of american phyco wich is great

even though Michael's entry isnt finished, it still somewhat feels more complete to me; even if we dont SEE what happens next, we KNOW it while I feel that in vain's entry, while starting quite nicely and continuing with a good flow, the ending kinda feels like it was just droped there... but still, I quite liked both, good luck!

uploaded... time for bed!

Sorry guys I won't be able to finish due to school work but most the story will get posted.

Glad you're back Vain! You don't do enough on here, I really like your comics... And it'll be cool to see your new character actually in action. Good look to you too Mike.

Fun Match cant wait!