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Barnyard Butchers vs Black Dog vs Dipuc vs Jane Blonde | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 1

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Barnyard Butchers vs Black Dog vs Dipuc vs Jane Blonde | All-Together Now! 2010 Round 1

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Ah this classic turns up in the recommends once more! I love this match TO DEATH

Le Fred: And who doesnt love pillbug? XD Nobody, that's who :D QTR: Lots of potential here, so I can't wait to see the finished product. The first page is really pretty captivating - love the giant head, and Dipuc looks magical. I'm not exactly sure what's going on in Page 5, but the imagery is intriguing. My two favorite images are the Black Dog/Dipuc split shot on page 6, and the first image on Page 4. That's a lovely idea, really - shame I didn't think of that first! :)

qtrnevermore: epic fail on my end No. public question: should I submit a BB of this with text? should i find a better way to scan this that doesnt cut off my pages? should i keep trying this comic thing... or just stick with art? Yes. Yes. Keep doing comics.

qtrnevermore: public question: should I submit a BB of this with text? should i find a better way to scan this that doesnt cut off my pages? should i keep trying this comic thing... or just stick with art? Yes, probably, and defenitly YES.

epic fail on my end. I enjoyed your comic a bit mister kent, but eager to see the outcome. good luck in the tourney. public question: should I submit a BB of this with text? should i find a better way to scan this that doesnt cut off my pages? should i keep trying this comic thing... or just stick with art?

mister kent- awesome job, your line work and use of greys were very well done. Cool story. qtr- Cool art but I didnt know what the heck was going on.

MisterKent: Wow! What a great comic! I really loved the direction you took this story beyond simple revival and fighting. The new design for Dipuc is very cool, despite just losing his scars and gaining a robe. Your usage of blacks and grays are seriously pretty and work in your favor. The perspective on that face on page 2 panel 4 is kind of odd looking. Mostly because of how that hair is handled. I think your backgrounds were alright, but I think they could have been done better. I'm not gasping for them, but they could have been better detailed, I think. I also love how you had everyone Dipuc had killed in this comic (excluding The Flying Brick who he kills later in his BB, points for making a continuity) it really made it all the more interesting. I really liked this comic and win or lose, I want to see more with Dipuc. QTRNevermore: It's too bad you couldn't get as far as you wanted on this! I think unless you plan on handwriting your text, you shouldn't draw the speech bubbles, since fonts may not always fit in the bubbles you create. (Which I wonder why you didn't do for this, because you have good handwriting.) I'm a big fan of this little traditional kick you've been on lately. I think it's gonna be good for you, but you're also gonna need to start working with the tone and colored created by your paper more as well I think. (I love the brown paper, totally getting ahalfacupatea vibes.) I kind of get the story that's going on here, your visuals tell a story just as much as your words would so that's good. I think you've done well with the time you had, so good job. I hope to see you battle again soon!

Mister Kent, great job! the story is really interesting and pretty funny, I greatly loved the last three panel... It even has more Pillbug than the actual Pillbug fight! And who doesnt love pillbug? XD QTR, though I cant figure out whatever the hell is going on, it sure LOOKS pretty good, really like the style you were going for here.

uploading the no text version. im really sorry guys. halloween night club work won this battle.

busting ass on this between the 5nightofhalloweenohell at work. i can promise an epic cameo at least. and zombies.