@ HeyZoos: I'm glad you like the writing and the action, I wasn't too sure about it because this is the first time I've done an action sequence/scene. There was actually supposed to be one more part to the fight scene, but I lost time so I had to change and edit it out.
I liked the wittiness (I think I spelled that right) of your comic, I really loved your depiction of Ivan and the building hop scene, it was awesome!
Thanks again HeyZoos for battling me, it really pushed me to put my all into it and I really liked drawing Pico. :D
@ Dan: Thanks, I'm trying to work faster and faster, since I always find that I am short on time (than the given week), it's the only way to make up for it. I'll definitely try to pay more attention to cloth detail the next time around. I hope to improve more and more as I go.
Shoj - Art was lot tighter this round, looking good! You're figures are nice, but needs some wrinkle and fold lovin. Especially on Ivan's poofy pants and shirts. A quick dig of the forums turns up little, but look up Hogarth books and there's always DeviantArt. Keep pushing the details and you could have some slick art!
Zoos - An unfortunate rush job, but understandable with these crazy week deadlines. Lose more than one day, kiss that finished comic bye-bye. A nice little story, but after your last two, it just feels kinda hollow.
Shojin, your comic is great! I love the pacing and the writing, and the action is well executed too! If i have to lose to you, i'm glad it's to a comic of this quality :)
Despite having to fly to San Francisco and back and dealing with packing up for the move back to school, this week wasn't as bad as I thought. Rushed quite a bit with this. Thanks for battling with me HeyZoos and hell man, I understand the whole college drama thing. Glad you got it all worked out.
I feel your pain (except for the part about fixing the college drama, I'm still working through mine). At least you got something uploaded though, eh? I'm looking forward to seeing what you got done though. If we don't cross paths in the tourney I'm hoping we will someday later. I like Pico.
Comic submitted.
I wish, wish, wish i could have done more with this. In all consideration, maybe i could have, but i had to tend to horrible awful shitty college drama earlier this week that could have potentially ruined my semester completely and set me back half a year. That shit's fixed, but it ate up nearly all of my week trying to fix it because i'm a stupid retard.
However, i wasn't content with uploading nothing, and i didn't want to default on Shojin, especially since i had an idea panned out for my comic. Anyways, though i'm pissed i couldn't spend the majority of my time on detailing this a lot better, i'm pleased that i was able to at least submit a full comic.
I think you should both have a Bruce Willis cameo and then we replace the Entertainment category with how "Bruce Willis" the comic was. Yippie-Kai-Yay.
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