Stumbled upon this. It's precious to see your older stuff, Skulls. It's still really fun to read, even though you've grown quite a bit since this battle. And I really have to applaud all of your cameos!
@ Dimension: Thanks! I was beginning to think maybe making her talk too much wasn't a good idea. My first intentions were for her to narrate what was happening through the whole comic, which I'm starting to think it might've been better instead of actually making her think and talk to herself. I'll be sure to work more on scaling too. :D
@Vain: Aww, I was wondering what happened, dude. It's alright though, Can't wait to see your side of the battle sometime :)
really sorry about the default.... i dont want to bore you with excuses i just fugded up :/ sorry A.X i really enjoyed your take on billy was fun the "BOINK" bit made me laugh great sound effect il upload what i did wich is fail somewhere so at least you can see it . CHEERS
A.X: Good read! :D I really dig the story for some reason. It was a little bit on the simple side, but I felt it had a decent conflict. I do think the dialogue needs a little bit of work. I feel you make Xia talk to her self too much. I know it's so the readers can understand whats going on and how she feeling, but I feel you can cut back on it a bit and just use expressions and visuals to give the reader the idea of whats going on. The art looked good (well until you had to quickly sketch stuff) the inks and toning were nice. You had a bit of issues with scale though, somethings looked way too small or way too big, even while in perspective. Other than that nice work, yo!
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