[quote] other than no more creepy pikachu photos..
WELL STRIKE ME DOWN HERE AND NOW, YOU BASTARD, BECAUSE THE CREEPY PIKACHU JUST WON'T STOP.
also thank you for your comments everyone.
no qualms with either of these. once again, it sucks one of you can't move ahead because these were both tight.
red, am i detecting some ashley wood now in with the mahfood?
rofl, good to see you use mystery meat & use him/her/them well.
my vote will count for nothing as literally, i saw no clear winner here. both were good without anything i could really complain about. other than no more creepy pikachu photos. good solid work, both of you.
Gave this one to Red, because I was impressed by the colouring/shading style she used, and I loved that explodey-smoke effect, and the ridiculous dialogue made me laugh. Also, boobs.
Rofl's lines are looking good, but I marked down for boring storyline. The "You're my opponent! Now we fight!" plot is so old it's arthritic.
DAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYUUUUUM!!
These were both so sexy. Nice level up ROFL this new shit is looking dope! That pikachu made me want to vomit. Red, i dunno whats the diff. here from your Haley comics but something about it besides the fan service is looking extra good here, maybe its the palette like Angie said, quite enjoyed what you did here with the lettering. You both seem to be improving with the action too.
Really liked um guys this is fine splendid work.
Moa is a joke character, she's a ridiculous exaggeration, no one is really like that in high school haha. I really really hope no one thinks I'm being serious here.
Red, Your colors were a bit harsh with all the splattered ink, comic tones and thick lines. It was sometimes way to dark with not a lot of contrast at all. I'm not exactly a fan of the story. It truely felt to fan-servicey and 'fake'. The story just was flowing and all the "fuck me like omg" made me cringe. I don't recall it being like that in high school. lol
Rofl, this is the best I've seen from you in a while. Both the art and story were consistent! Your mixture of textures and tones came out well, but as Angie said- the tones were sometimes too dark. Try playing with their levels a bit next round, okay?
Red-I'd like to see you stick with really simple color palettes again sometime in the future, it really worked well here. I think you also did a nice job with the shading in this, it felt a bit tighter than your previous works. I think the only thing that bothered me was everything was kind of abrupt at the end. Like the action felt sort of choppy on page 11, I think zooming out or moving the camera around just a bit more would have given me a better idea of what was going on and would have made everything feel a little more dynamic.
Rofl-this is the best I've seen from you in a bit! I was happy to see you maintain your quality throughout the entry. The big thing I noticed was all your tones are crazy dark throughout the entry. Try to work with lighter base colors in the beginning so your stuff doesn't get so dark you can't tell what's going on. I think that was really the only thing I noticed since I had a hard time telling different objects apart.
Red - I really enjoyed the beginning, but the end didn't feel as solid. Some things stuck out later, though, like the demonic football players. The art was a bit messy, but it didn't I didn't really notice while reading and it looked attractive overall.
Rofl - I liked this one, too. It started off somewhat serious and almost somber, but then dove into zany action pretty well. I liked what you did with her demon powers. Your art overall has gotten a lot better, too.
Qyz: I realized when I was drawing this that people might think that I'm drawing certain things to attract certain voters, and this is really going to sound like BS but I was just drawing what I enjoyed to keep me going. I honestly wasn't thinking I could just stick in the boobs and I'd win. No, no no no. I love drawing women, I love writing mean characters... this comic came out like this because I had fun with it. I obviously wasn't overly concerned with a deep plot haha, this was intended to be just super-stupid fun. I had to keep it that way because this week I worked 44 hours, over 6 days, at 2 jobs. I'm dead... hence the decline in quality hahaah. But I'm so happy that I did this, because even if I lose, I can't believe I was able to pull this off. I was nervous about the style change, especially the coloring, I'm glad you liked it (the first part at least lol)
and roflqu: I am so happy you finished, and brought your A game. This looked great dude. I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT.
this deserves a better comment than that... so!
I enjoyed this battle a lot.
Red: The first few pages were terrific! Really stunning. I do really enjoy your stuff when it's at this level. But, the quality really did decrease after that (understandably). But, towards the end, It got to the point where I sometimes didn't know what was going on. Story wise, It started out promising, but you lost me later on. I feel you just threw boobs and sex in there just to try to rally male votes to help you win (I shamelessly tried the same thing when I deathmatched Puzzlething, haha) and I don't think it flowed at all. It was like, here's the plot, now let's work the plot around boobs and sex. If it had been more like the beginning of the comic, I think I would have definitely voted you higher in all regards. Good job finishing, and good job on good art!
Rofl: Super fun read! Seriously! You had the same thing happen with the quality that Red did, as in, it started out strong, and gradually decreased, though fortunately I could tell what was going on in your panels (though there were a few parts that took me longer to make sense of than others). Fabulous lighting, though I think some contrasting colors would help it all read much better. Good job man, Really glad to see you finish.
To both of you, amazing job, and to whoever wins, good luck!
To whoever loses, who cares? You both did some damn good work you should both be proud of!
What is inside Mystery Meat? Will Moa ever find her way back to High School? How does Mystery Meat go to the bathroom? What happened to the football team? Is Mystery Meat good for you? And what is up Moa's skirt? I eagerly await the answers.
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