Tag Tournament 2003: Round 1

I'm really digging your pacing, and your style. good stuff

man i sure wish i had finished this fight. my page makes no sense without chaotics part. i love the paneling on the first pages and kudos on the backgrounds.

I cant see your page. It wont load for me for some reason. I would have liked to see you guys turn some stuff in, Id have liked to see how you guys drew Haiden and Max. And thanks, I was proud that I did backgrounds for once.

i didnt get to tell you this earlier, but...i dig the FOOK out of the pages you seemingly pulled out of your magic hat, my friend. under pressure and fatigued? you're a notch short of meta-human. your effort at the backgrounds (ROCK!) and inking make me think, \"damn, i dropped the ball!\"

thanks wu. i think i spent far more time trying to pace my side into three pages than i should have. wasnt quite thinking outside of the box, especially since the 3 pages wasnt even the max page limit. whoops.

You're a madman when you pick up a pencil. Pacing, panel layout, dynamics, I even love what your font work... your's the the first I saw use different fonts for each of the characters. Brilliant.

I have to ditto what's already been said... amazing work on those backgrounds, but not only that, there's a great level of detail all around, it really caught my eye while thumbnailing.

toast, I did that in my first battle (against gauge) nearly a year ago... and in every battle that I've had text bubbles in...

not a diss to vision at all mind you... I'm along the same thought as you man, for me a different font for each is like giving them each their own voice

Absolutely badass, Vision. I agree with Wu, the different fonts make it sound more like people when i read it, less like a narrator.

Fucking badass. Sadly I'm going through my bullshit fits and slumps so at the moment even though I'll change my mind on it later that I don't care. I might upload something IF I can get to it but I'm not feeling it for now but I will force myself to do so.

As a set of drawings they're really cool. your faces rock. The dialogue between the characters really gave me the feel of gritty, tough street fighting characters. Only problem I have is, not really knowing what's going on and where it's going on. You kinda jump from one guy to the other guy and there's bodies flying, then someone taps on his shoulder, only it's the same guy that just got punched...I think. Then there's just these oddly cropped silhouettes. Really lost me. I get it now, but I had to kinda backtrack and sort it out, which isn't what you want. Anyhow, I guess I'd just say work on clarity.