Fence, I think it would have been possible to jump past the part with HT right into the fun stuff with Jpop and Finnegan. I don't know what really happened, but it seems like you kinda burned out after page 3.
The HT stuff works, I don't mean it's bad or whatever, but I do think it would have been possible to cut it out, and just have three pages of the two guys being awesome. Then maybe you could've gotten it finished? I'm just throwing it out there I guess.
This was still a lot of fun, though, like usual.:>
dogg--It's not really the markers that bother me, but the colors themselves seem sort of unfinished, like you could have done more with them. Maybe there is too much white.
But anyway it was totally cool and stuff.
hahah i liked dawg's idea of scar but i just love fence's style so much. it was a hard one to call.
the only critique i had was for fence. hey. Finish! hahah
but seriously, i liked these a lot!
-J
thanks dudes, yea I'm super sorry about being incomplete, my bad. I was closer this time at least, I guess.
also that was the coolest scar I could have had, it's almost sad to see it go ; ;
I thought both were good, granted there were some things I didn't like.
Dawg: Not bad man, not bad at all. The Jingles being beheaded in this story does look like something that would confuse people as to what you're plannin', but I think nobody is really going to get confused so you're safe there mang. The only thing that really killed my vote was the use of markers on this. It just looks so messy and as much as I hate to say it... your digital colors are levels beyond this comic. The only problem with traditional colors is that you usually gotta make it look consistent, and with markers that's kinda hard to pull off, especially when some colors overlap and make parts darker, like the splotches on the pink flesh color you chose for J-Pop there.
I did like the story here, short and sweet, but also pretty funny, I think the \"Which scar does Finnegan get\" idea is a nice touch. I'm voting for C personally.
Fence: STOP LEAVING COMICS UNFINISHED!! You really would of taken a commanding lead had you of finished you know. But regardless of that what you have here looks amazing! I really admire your style and the look of this comic overall. The only part that erked me was just seeing pencils. Oh well...
The story really stood out for me out of these two comics, I really thought the idea of J-Pop encountering somebody who actually annoys him is a great idea considering J-Pop would probably be the champ of annoying others ;3.
Dawg I'm digging your story, but I think you gotta practice on traditional colors more seeing as how your BB right now is looking to be one of your better looking comics. Fence I'm giving you my vote for creative story and it left me entertained but quality is marked down. Nice comics overall.
Dawg-It's good to see you experiment with different coloring mediums but the marker really hurt you. Your digital stuff tends to be much stronger but the marker was appropriate for your style. The pages could also be a bit bigger because it was very difficult to read the text because it was very small on my monitor. But other than that I enjoyed the comic, I thought the scar was pretty neat and you had some nice things going on in your story.
Fence-Thems were some awesome Angie cameos, you draw her well. You always have such nice inks and it's a shame you were unable to finish. I hope that you're able to have better time management in the future since this has happened several times. You also had a fun story that I enjoyed, and I was still able to read it on the unfinished pages.
Good job both of you!
Hey both of you guys did a good job
having a style and sticking too it is nice.
dawgmastas it really worked well the stuff where you
mixed digital coloring with non digital stuff that rarely works
in my mind.
Fence wonderfull inking and stylised drawings kinda downer you did not finish it
anywhom both of you great job!
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