Damn! that was awesome!
A roller-coaster ride of emotions.
Heime:
Well done. suit comics, it's like watching those serial killer specials on tv, you just keep watching to see what fucked up thing happens next! Very engaging story. i like how believable you made it through the perspective of the police testimony. The art helps make it creepy.
Corny:
Hilarious, great funny expressions on the animals and good jokes, left me wanting more.
Hiemie - I liked your comic because it was fairly intense, It really had some emotional ground to it which I think is hard to do with comics. I do think that the form in some of your panels are a little wonky could be more shaped.
Corny - Pretty funny, Characters were pretty charming and fun. I think you should work on your backgrounds a little more. To me it just seems like the background seems lifeless and uninspired compared to the characters. Try studying some photos of people in the city or around buildings. see how they are positioned on the ground and perspective.
wow.. . Suit is becoming more and more of what i consider the scariest character on void.. i used to think it was charmies char dr. whatsiz name with the garbage disposal for a mouth.. that dude was nuts!.. but suit man.. that dudes crazy.
Corny tho i gotta say you got a nice nod from me just for sticking the \"dont taze me bro\" in yur comic... fuggin hilarious. and the \" my sweet dear lion god \" a gem.
good work to both...
i agreed with dawg, hiemie. the panels were things happened seemed like they lacked some impact. the hand made feel was in full effect & looking pretty good though i must say.
corny, yours was short & sweet. i found it pretty funny. while you could pace it a little slower, i think telling a full story in 3 pages is also pretty cool. nice work
-J
Hiemie- I think it's really interesting that you made Amy yell \"fire\", since people really are more-likely to come to help you if they think there's a fire than if you're screaming \"help, someone is vilating my cooch\"
I don't think it was supposed to be action-packed, it was supposed to tell through Twerp's eyes, and she had no idea what was happening. In that sense, we had no idea what was happening exactly, either. I caught myself with my mouth hanging open on the final page, I was really into it.
Corny- I really liked your side of the comic, even though it was short, it was light-hearted and a humorous spin on such a character that really shouldn't be funny. I wish it had been a little longer, but it gets the point across, and the art is so happy and fun, I can't help but love it.
hiemie: It was pretty good. I have two things to point out. One, the action panels were pretty weak. I'm SURE you know, but it's definitely something you need to work on. Also, I think you should play with the contrast/curves in photoshop or some other program more. It'd really get that black popping.
corny: I also liked yours. As far as crits go.. your pacing was too quick. It jumped from point to point, and nothing really had much time to develop. Also, because of that, some things aren't clear. I must say, though, it was funny.
I'm voting them pretty close. Hiemie gets my votes for quality and entertainment, and Corny gets my vote for creativity. But yeah. Good job guys.
CORNY- way to bring it. You make me want to go to this zoo. XD You left me bummed this was so short and wanting more. I'm not sure if thats a good thing, but I was thoroughly entertained. Great expressions, great color and all around funny take on Suit. Wonderful job
HIEMIE- I've told you already, but to reiterate- WOW. The depths of Suits depravity and addiction have sunk lower than I ever could've imagined. I like the fact that the comic leaves you imagining the horrific scene because of the dialogue instead of the art. Makes it more grotesque somehow.I fully believed Twerps reaction, and liked the police report intro very much.
I love when Void battles leave me wondering who to give the vote to. :) you guys rock.
I really REALLY liked both.
Heimie: you are so awesome. I really loved how you told the story, and your dark humor. You're just awesome. the end.
corny: you are also awesome, you turned a suit comic into something light-hearted and funny. Your style is adorable, and the giraffe in the first page is hysterical. and gasp! I see TL Bot! :3
Squirt and Twerp aren't furries so I'm sure they'll just sit down and have a nice chat about politics or their local sporting team.
You guys and your wild accusations.
Can't wait to see the results you two.
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