story wise... i went over my head with planning. maybe i'll release a bb explains things that weren't just in pye's pov, but... sometimes i think my ideas are going to fall flat regardless. still..i liked pye's idea more, keep it simple... .....back to the drawing board i guess.
I think a bit different.
Qtr's battle was beautifully done. I don't dig the style. There's nothing wrong in it, its cool and all, but it's just personal preference.
But Pi, man you're going at it. Congrats to you as your style is gaining shape, seeing you pulling of those poses of the king is awesome. And what really made the difference for me was the speech. Extra creativity points for sure man, lovely vocabulary.
I see something beeeeeg coming!
QTR: OMG the paintings. They had a pretty nice touch into them, even if personally i found them WAY too dark, but it was nice. Hm, the plot, otherwise was very confusing and I couldn't figure out much of what happened, except for several voiders being jailed in the castle and rescued by SP.
Pi: Actually, I was a bit disappointed by the art, having your BB as reference, which was superb, this now looked a bit rushed. The plot, in other hand was very neat, using other kind of storytelling, which I really dug.
I think this is a very equilibrated match, I wish you good luck :D
the king is back, and this time... he'll have some fury to unleash against the... mini-fury of dr. pye. Gabo, hope you peek at this & expect a cameo.
no default-ness! time to get dirty...
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