Whoooooa... let me take a minute to pick my jaw up off the floor...
4:00am, VAST improvement. Like, seriously. I was blown away by the detail, and what's more, I could actually unterstand what was going on for once. Your characterization is spot-on, too. The characters had a lot of character! :3 Only thing that really stood out at me was the perspective on the backgrounds. I still can't tell of that was supposed to be a cobblestone path or a hill of giant biscuits...
Rtv! The colors looked kind of like they were splattered on, like, in the messy-bad kind of way. Everything else is pure gold. The less dialogue is definitely an improvement.
PS: I love both of these characters!
Crill, If that's the tip, where's the rest of the iceberg? I don't undetstand the comment.
4.00AM
That was your best yet motherfukka! The detail on page one, was astounding. The shooting, bulllets and perspectives, you really pushed yourself.
Dispite the fact i couldn't use Gum the way i intended, you did it for me. I like how we think alike, at the end you blow a hole through me and i blew one back in mine. awesome.
Like said before you need some polishing up on the anatomy, not that i'm king shit of anatomy. but try to draw in figure first instead of lines. Like my nigga LeSean told me once; \"Think shape not line.\"
It is obvious you did your research well. Cuz the way Rtv! thinks and speak is damn near fukking accurate. No one ever did cept Caanan and you just outdid it. Great man,, felt like i was reading my own stuff. if i could vote i would.
You did leave me hanging there with the open ending, but i did the same cuz we talked about a team up and i'm sure as hell honored to do that.
Shit it's been ages since some one pinned down my character that precise, i'll be glad to do this again.
ok 4:00Am i like action but you put to much, save some and make it drag things out.
Rtv! your comic was great i liked but you put to many clouds in front, what i mean is your in comic what happen in the 6 mouths does he get better or what you know, i dont know if you did this or that, why don't you look in the mirror and look at your self in all from up to down from side to side you might get what i'm saying but just a little tip. but you did great man any time now man and your on your way to the next level your almost there dude keep it up and i'll wait tell your next comic...
Kudos to both of you! They are both top notch art, being shrapnel girl only fault not being completely coloured (read this as using the same style in the first pages into all of them), but it's still fairly nice.
I'm so fukking waiting for next Estrella's fight.
4AM - You definately have a handle on basic comic page layout. Good paneling, scene angle/selection, composition. I think a bit of work on anatomy is in order and faces and expression work would serve you. Overall, I think a bit too much \"action\" inhibited the flow of your pages. Much like your battles, pick your action sequences sparingly. That's the icing on the cake....pace with increasing tension and momentum to get to the climax, then Bust One!! Good effort though.....keep it up.
RTV! - I've been looking forward to seeing some new stuff from you. As usual, you impress me with subtleties, a characteristic I like to believe is present in my own work. I like your style, but I'd like to see some tighter anatomy work from you....some of your exaggerations seem a bit strained. I like the way you paced the comic, but I think some more thought on panel sizes would make your work clearer and make your strengths stand out. As it stands, your pages suffer from a lack of focus on the main idea. Trust me, my man, a few adjustments to layout, composition, and flow will take your art to a new level. Nice work though....fun to read and look at.
MAN MAN MAN
4:00AM your style is like. A dream, I am in love with it, it so awesome and so it Shraps, seriously one of my favorite fighters here. I loved the story and the dialog, i love Shraps attitude but the fight kind of seemed the same. I recognized a lot of poses from some of your other fights and I just think you could do a lot more with it. The visuals were specTACULAR THOUGH.
RTV your pretty hardcore ain't ya? Your coloring was sweet, your styles boss and it was even funny amidst the serious junk going on. ALL AROUND ENTERTAINING MAN. EVERYTHING WAS TIGHT. The only thing I noticed was some anatomy flaws on Shrap when she first appears but uh HELLO ONE THING daang, man, you's totally brought some heat.
Mahalo for those awesome fights, sirs.
Thanks for those awesome comics.
OOOOOOH SHIT NIGGAS! lol Excuse my french, but yall both brought it! Brought it strong niggas. I dun have nothin much to say but good job to both yall, especially to Sticky.
Big ups yo you brought out your real A game this time homie and Im glad to see it.
Getcho respect mang, fa sho.
Rtv! Hahaha nigga yeah! You brought out dat A game too! Yessir.
This was a great battle here.
Hehehe, well R man,... my head didn't explode, but5 I was quite impressed. Thr bullet in the eye scenes... brillant! I love it! I expect this every time now man. Every time! See \"Sue\" latter.
be blessed
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Both sides were quite epic in action, but I found that RTV's was a good bit easier to follow, and that coloring was amazing. Still, both of you did some good work here. The sequence with the axes was very entertaining in yours, 4:00.
RTV's thinking about sex when he's nearly getting himself blown apart. It's really quite delightful. XD
There were some problems with my pages, but i talked to Toast hours ago. We've resolved the problem according to his confirmation.
I've also sent in custom thumbs to speed up the process.
I think this fight broke a record considering extensions. (not counting mine from 2004)
In my opinion it's worth it, quality wise i haven't pumped out something like this since P2 vs Rtv!
I'd give Shrapnel girl alot more dialogue, but also didn't want the action to be overlapped by too much banter. If i kept it BW, i could've done alot more. But i wanted our alliance to start off colourfully.
I'll find that balance soon enough. We should do this again sometime.
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