Gee,
That shit was explosive. A huge improvement.
I could really feel the action and the hits that were passed around. I like the perspectives you used, particularly on page one.
You got the characters almost correct, though in the first page Rtv sounds a lil too gettho for my taste. He's an awesome referee though, you had me laughing at his responses. Especially when that guy got their ass beat with one punch.
That panel with the fukked up elephant really caught my eye. Lots of dept in those characters on page three, in AB's pose, the crowds faces. Love it.
We'l definatly collab.
Fel,
Angie practically stole my comment, but i'll say it anyway. Draw everything first, then ink then coolour. So in case you run out of time, the quality is still there.
Practice on drawing detail and huge spaces of black.
The colouring is still awesome. However i don't like Radios looking like a kid, but shit..it beats the hell outta Radios with a perm. Himawari looks hot too! Get rid of that comic sans..or at least CAPS it.
I'm sure you'll finish next time.
Ima this fight looked way better than i rem you being, probably the extra polish, or your getting better, you really captured the action well and the pacing made the 10 pages zoom by. I really think you took the theme and worked it just right so it felt slightly spoofish but still exciting
Fel some decent stuff here, but it felt sort of short a bit forced. The art was on par, but i think ya should push yourself more on the panels that arent easy instead of just goin with semi fake stuff sometimes. Overall i like asian blokes more.
Thank you for the comments guys.
Anginess- Yeh, it was something I had to do, I started my comic life because of Akira Toriyama and this is just something I had to get off my chest and I am glad that you enjoyed it. But, the reason I didn't wanna involve any spectators getting literally blown away or stuff like that, 'cos there is no energy or shooting balls ^_^;>>> Inferno, thanks dude! Glad you likes!
Fel- I know this is ain't yer best and I do wish that you'd finished it, but I know that you have your reasons, maybe next time huh? Still love them colors, though and the lastr panel on the last page would look really slick!
-Gee.
omfg that was such a sick fight personally at first a i thought p2 was gunna take it away but imageenation u blew it away that was nice the way u did like a dbz tornament thing
p2 i loved u art too it was great
ImaGEEnation-I grew up on Dragonball and adore shonen and their obligatory tournament arcs so I enjoyed this dude haha. Be careful with necks, on the bottom of page 2 last panel P2's neck is insane yo. I think you could have also pushed the cheesy shonen tournament thing a little more by having more insane ass techniques used that you know, blow away the audience literally and such. I kind of wish you'd also actually toned it with tones instead of marker to give it that authentic feel but marker is fine as well. The last panel on the last page is also looking a little weird anatomy wise. But other than that I enjoyed your half, I'm afraid it might get lost on people who aren't fans of the shonen genre though, but was still a lot of fun.
Fel-first things first, omg dude I'm totally going to walk to your house wherever it is, get on your computer, and erase Comic Sans from your hard drive and put a password on there that forbids you from ever reinstalling it. Pleaaaaaaase download something sexier of http://www.blambot.com you make me cry with this font abuse yo! Other than that, it really sucks you weren't able to finish. In the future it might help to get everything all pencilled/inked before doing any coloring so you don't get so focused on coloring and at least finish the battle somewhat. I don't know what happened, but obviously it's a downgrade from your previous match which I hate to see :( but shit happens and I hope you go all out on your next match.
A whooooooooooooooole lotah love in dis'un. BROTHAS! LETS BRAAAAAANG DOWN DA HOUSE!!! CAN YUUUU FEEEEEL DA Powwwaaaaah!?
lol yall kick ass, and kick ass all good like.
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