Rtv! That was a pretty awesome comic man. Especially, the first panel of the first page. Although, I do admit that I preffer your inks over your pencil...but this is still pretty good yo!
And yes it is time that we both do that collab we've been talkin' 'bout!
Knomer, I know this is prolly not your best, but I still dig it overall.
Keep it up fellas!
RTV-I really liked the look of this fight, while I prefer your inks, the pencils worked well. I just wish you had cleaned up a bit more and maybe bumped up the levels to make the pencils a bit darker and the whites white. Page 3 especially could have been cleaned up a lot more, it just looked a little messy to me. I enjoyed the style of the pages itself, your anatomy looked very good on this round.
Knomer-I feel as if you could have done a lot more for this fight. I was confused about what was going on occasionally and the inks could have been a bit tighter. I think you could have put a lot more time into this, it just doesn't look like there was much time spent at all. Give us some backgrounds dude and be careful with your faces, they're looking very long. Work on your proportions and give us more of an environment and story next time. Battles of nothing but fighting are fun and all but this was just kind of boring. Also try varying the camera a bit and doing larger panels, the action just felt very cramped.
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