Iggy and Pongo gets advantage on story and comedy.
The good doctor gets points for adding ambience to Arma.
Pye when you shade in greys, the contrast gets washed out when you treat it is a fill. Hence the the tonal range seems flat. In the black and white approach, you should also take into account how you will seperate certain elements in the picture like fore ground and and background elements for example. Get courageous with blacks as well. And practice varying line widths with one or two pens.
Sphinx, you did just as well with the tonal range and the minimal use of color. However in terms of perspective, Pi got you beat. Just practice composition and backgrounds. Drawing from life now andthen will help loosen you up. Otherwise good job on story and comedy. I love the irony of spin cycle.
That up-skirt pongo shot will haunt me for life! O_o
Hehe, two very different approaches to an interaction between the two characters, but both very enjoyable!
Well im all done. im pretty happy with the result considering im abit rusty from my absence in the comic scene. i tried something diferent to what i normally do colouring wise. hope its ok.
Cant wait to see your pages Pi
cheers
Sphinx
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