Robo,
I'm so glad the Traveler's back. Great re-introduction of Traveler, the step by step paneling and the eventual revelation of the aged Traveler. I like how you built it up with the dialogue, the interaction between Trav and Pye.
What really did it for me was the page where Traveler comes back to the city and sees it's all changed. It links well with what Warsaw was doing and inspires alot.
Pi
Your entry was also short but sharp.
I like the tying in of the stories as both of your comics had a similar feel, exept yours is set at night and Robo's at afternoonish. The last panel kinda left me hanging for a lil more dialogue but i could tell what was going on. I am curious how Traveler will juggle between the Haven and Red Light Corpse.
These are the type of fights that bring back the 'Void molding' like the old days!
I love these battles and evan, the dialogue is awesome, and I've always liked the way you draw your comics. The sparseness don't feel sparse, instead it contributes to the feel of the comic. Oh man. I'd say I wanted more, but this is an awesome build up.
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PI: marvelous, the second page takes the cake. I love it, you're trying to play with angles and it was perfect to make it as if it appears from lower part/ slightly infront and under pye. i like the creepiness that you have. I wish it would be longer, and I was dissapointed to see the last panel on how it ended. but keep improving pi, I'm looking forward to see your next work.
nice read guys, cool!
Mr.Robot it is a pleasure to be seeing Traveler again. You've managed to make his plight pull at my heart strings. I enjoy how you capture emotion and atmosphere through subtle nuances. Your comics always have the sense of being a real experience rather than plastic drama. I really got a giggle out of the zombie-back riding. I have one critique though and forgive me for asking - why does Dr.Pye look like an adult in one panel and then a teenager in the others?
Pi, it always makes me smile to discover your growing improvement with every battle you enter. Your character too has grown in notoriety and I love how he is a vehicle for story development. The dialogue was a little stiff and I was dissapointed by how the story in this fight just kind of dropped off. There was no real element to say that this was going to be continued.
Still, voting was difficult for me. I wish there was another category for most improvement. Both of you have shown remarkable progress and creativity here. Good job!
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