Great work gentlemen. The story similarities on Void latley will really shape this city in an interesting place.
-Gee
I love the opening, the cover's red highlighted text. Simple detail, but it really sets the reader in a state of expectancy. I like the little detail on AB's shoe to display how he's feeling. That goofy walk and face expression also very animated. Great start with the blowjob, pretty daring for a new guy, but if that's Lang's thing possibilities are endless.
Good introduction of Tod too, his expression really shows annoyance and AB even MORE annoyed by Tod blowing his fun. \"I've got psychic powers and an imagination, what do you got?\" fukking hilarious what happens next followed by Tod's response after seeing AB's large golgotha. On page 5 panel three has an attack that looks rather simplified for your style, i suggest a different angle or some more speedlines. Other than that, the fight only got better when everything started exloding and cops got attacked. Cool finishing move on the robot too. Your fights have some way of being memorable, i suggest a continueous story.
-EuE
Good first fight with Tod. I like certain angles you chose to use,
like the on one page two where Tod jumps in the air. Those elbow smashes are also pretty dynamic. I like the simplified keyframe motion of the muay thai king on page 2 panel 10.
The Sphere of Death panel also contained a nice distorted angle. I'm curious to see what you'll come up with next, ao much power and no money...that's one interesting ironic bum. lol
Keep it up guys!
Eullogy - Its not about who wins the fight in the comic its about which comic is better. Which comic drew you in more... Which comic had better story, humor, art etc. It doesn't even have to include a fight between the characters.
Its all about makin the best comics you can make not just playin streetfighter =P
Eullogy- The point of my comic was to make these two as mates at the end of the day. Y'see, Tod is a powerful mofo, he turned a whole street into pieces of rubble, but yet A.B, survived it. So that shows that A.B can still dodge Tod's moves. As for the VCPD interruption, why wouldn't they get involved? They are the law of the city and to see such massive destruction at a quiet alleway, anyone would've called the police. I mean, you did realised, that Tod, did the Hobo-ken...And as for who wins what? It does NOT matter. If you look at others comics, the story could easily started as two fighters being in the same team. No one has to die or lose. As long as both fighters are actually involved in the comic, it's all good. But, if you really like to know, I was trying to portray Tod to be grateful, because, A.B actually DID saved him from the cyborg and in the comic, A.B does not care if he won the fight or not. The whole thing was just an unfortunate event. He never expected any of these to happen. He only wanted his headjob... >_<
From the start, I wanted to make the story to be very, unexpected. From one little thing, it turned out to be such a disaterous next scenes.
So, hope that clears something's out.
Peace,
Gee.
hmm yes.. I did make it short.. and I probably should have made the \"will beat you for food\" panel larger.. hell the whole intro could have been a page or two. And I'm sure I could have definitely made the fight much longer...
Gee- few crits: loved yer tod.. (also the random car and cats flying through the air) the police interuption was unneccessary(or could have been worked in a bit more), and because of it, bloke didn't actual \"beat\" tod in your comic (so technically if bloke wins.. he, doesn't win?). It drives me up the wall when fighters go at it but there is no clear winner, physically or otherwise. and later tod is all \"whoa im grateful, wee inner monologue\", about blokes cyborg kicky explosion(which was cool), but a couple pages before tod punched like half a city block of concrete to rubble like it was nothing (inconsistent in character attitude and/or power curve). which could be fixed.. like a bigger cyborg, or more guns, tod gets wounded, MORE cyborgs, etc..
other than that stuff.. I fucking LOVED it..
Nice comics, both of you
Gee: Cool fight, and your shading is really nice. I find it really considerate that you put a warning on the first page about the nudity -- some people might not be comfortable with that kind of thing, and many artists on Void don't give any warning about it in their fights.
Eullogy: Short and to the point! I would have liked to see a longer fight scene, but your art is great.
Ahahah, that was awesome. I love both of your boys styles and stories, hehe.
Ima - Killer comic, consistent and full of delicous kickin' and awesome expression, that was really cool.
Eu - Ahah, thank you for the SOAD lyrics, that was cute. I..love Tod. That's it. Haha, sick comic and I like the angles you had going, I just wish there had been moooree.
Hahah! good job, Eullogy! The end part is kinda similAr to mine....food! ^_^ I also like the way you draw A.B, especially as The KING. Enjoyed it, bro! Well done!
Huh? No man, not trying to insult you...I just don't really know who's who yet...but now I realised that Toast is a council >_<. I'm still kinda nooby here...
Oh Wei, Just in case you're reading this, I sent you my battle to your e-mail. Because it could not upload. So yeh, just let me know if you got it. Thank you. Gee.
YES YES YES YES YES YES! Asian Bloke didn't capture my interest-- until I read his comics! I can't wait for another.
And it took Eullogy enough damn time to get in. D:< But I can't wait for his stuff, either!
Hey, thanks for the support Typo! Yeh, me too, Tod, don't hold back! Because I won't...I guess that's how we do it In Void City...go hard or Go home! XD
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