wherfish: I love it, so funny!! prolly you can make it clearer at some point, I was having a bit hard time following the act, but ahhh so funny!
pon: good show, short and sweet, but somehow I expected something more.
fish got entertainment, pon got quality
Great stuff from ehtier side.. Pon edged it out on quality, but Fish took it for entermaint value..
Great job from ya both.. dammit.. why do all the cool characters have to die..
fish: Great stuff, girly. I really enjoyed this comic. I hope they all get to be this polished and entertainig in the future.
ponbiki: It was okay, nothing great. You need to work on your creativity. Guy's dialogue although Im sure intentionally cheesy could have been better. Great kill though. One of the best of this SDT.
piraticalfish: Very very nice linework and art... I was kinda confused at some points by the layout, sometimes wondering if I was reading the panels in the correct order, but once I got into things it was a-okay.
ponbiki: alas, this one was... not very fun. next time I want to see more actual VS work. I always hate those \"and then HE DIES\" endings for these battles. Everything leading up to it looks good... but that ending was disappointing.
fish awesome job... it was a blast reading yours and i love the way you drew maria.
if i had more time mine would have been longer but its ok ,you totally got me on this one.
keep on working like this and maybe you can get the win.. and wen you go back to fighting normal fight i hope you keep working like this. awesome job again.
Fish, his is probably the best I've seen from you, really cool. YOu got high marks from me.
Pon, good art, but like it's been said before, the story needed a little more. YOu still got good scores from me though
This one goes to fish.
The edge goes to Fish on this one. You both did a great job on the art but Fish's story had a bit more meat on it's bones. Though I too must admit, I had trouble following what was going on. Kudos to you both.
JV
Fish - I'm in agreement with Viper, it was sometimes hard to follow. I think you may have had too many small pannels on certain pages (ie - page 4). But overall, it was good. Good art, good entertainment, good marks...good luck
Pon - very very cool looking...but not a whole lot else.
I have to give the nod to McManning because the overall level of completness is much greater.
i worked real hard on trying to make sure each panel was an easy read, i guess i failed.
sixtem-i was a little worried that you might not appreciate the ivan cameo, but i'm glad you did.
those are some awesome looking pages pon.
I had some trouble following your story Piratical, every one else seems to get it fine though. Maybe its just me but I spent alot of time trying to figure out what was happening in each panel, took me out of the story alot. Maria looked awesome though, definitely my favorite part of the comic.
Despite the straightforward story, that machine gun death won it for me Pon, plus I was able to easily follow what was happening, for the most part.
Good fight ya'll.
Fish: Sweet mothe rof God that was cool, awesome work, absolutley classic stuff, Manning rocks my socks!
Ponbiki: Awesome art work, but storywise pretty bland, which is a shame.
I LOVE YOU FISHBOT, I TOTALLY DO.
Fishbot: This is a BEAUTIFUL battle. It was incredibly entertaining and I laughed out loud quite a few times. Especially when Ivan got crushed by the pole and them trying to \"assimilate\" the car.
Ponbiki: Great quality, as always, but most of your battles seem to be \"Here's the enemy, here's my person, they fight, other person dies.\" There's not really any development at all. It was pretty, but not really entertaining.
Oh man this is going to be one hell of a match up. At this point I think Guy is my favorite SDT character and I can't wait to see how he reacts to Zeus. Have a great fight you two.
JV
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