If you look closely you can only see chat talk in the pink text balloons.
AIM chat talk is what i noticed in Estrella's fight, i'm trying to keep consistancy here. I'll cut it down next time.
Like the Bachalo flavor in your work Rtv!, subtle but there. You've got a great style, enjoyed the story as well. The interior dialogue was well done.
Dal, its been said. Sorry you couldn't finish.
Dalarminus:
the art was not bad but also not good. i´m not talking about it being unfinished. there are just things that didn´t work i think. also i couldn´t tell what was really going on.
RTV: well the art was good but i didn´t like the colored pages because it seemed all blurry. as for the inks i really liked. for the story i´m not sure if i liked it because i don´t know all the background info. but it was really entertaining.
hope that comment is ok.
Dal
Well i'm glad you didn't default. Neither of us has our entry the way we planned, but i'm glad the fight FINALLY took place after three years. I think your line work has improved, but if it had some dialogue, it would still be more entertaining.
I know, lettering is a bitch, it took me 27 hours cuz i have a nack for confusing ass stories and dialogues.
I'm glad some of you liked my story, if i had one more page the climax would've worked beter.
From now i try to keep a consistancy in everything. Props to ponbiki for his BB: Te Perfect Trap
wich inspird me to return to Void. Rock on!
lol yea, i dont think i talked it up all that much? ^_^ i didnt have time to ink an letter but oh well and i knew he was gonna win either way not saying i half assed it just ran out of time an couldnt finish a few panels an took some shortcuts to speed it up i didnt want to default on these last 2 fights ^_^ so just uploaded it as is
rtv!- i am so glad that you're back, man. and you delivered at the top of your form. this was one of the most amazing pieces of comickry that i have seen in a good while.
dala-... yeah... well... yeah...
there's nothing i can say that hasn't been said before.
you said yourself that 6 of those pages were rushed.
it shows.
obvious points go to rtv!
I can honestly say I had no clue what happened in yours, Dala..... but I guess it doesnt matter anymore, the votes speak for themselves. Next time though, make sure to follow through with rules and such regarding Scar matches and such. Also.... its cool you talk up all yer fights as much as you do... but after a while.. when you never really deliver.... it gets old..... You are capable of WAY beter than the last 3-4 things we've seen from you.... im just wondering where it all went?
RTV!.... damn.... i knew you'd deliver, glad to see you'r still going so strong. Fight was beautiful, camera angles were stupendous as usual.
dala - man, even though it's unfinished i think this is one of the better fights i've seen from you. i enjoyed the visuals and the detail in certain area, and how you drew rtv!, too. wish there coulda been some text though......
and everyone is questioning why lina is there.....i'm guessing this battle was going to branch from the battle you had with her that never got posted?
rtv! - *sigh* (3 that was awesome. i always loved how you drew movement and action, and your style. one of your better stories too. it's gunna be awesome to team up with you. it's gunna be scary to fight you. i can't wait!
RTV- What can I say? Great stuff. Great \"bag of chips\" simile. I greatly enjoyed it. Despite that fact that this is not my favorite art style, I cannot hold that against you. So you get an A. I especially like the sketch work for the underside of the tree bark. Great texture. The story was interesting and even though it had a \"The end?\" I didn't really mind it. I'll be happy if this is a pandora's box of new stuff.
Dalarminus- Fail. This looks terrible. I dunno what else there is to say. You can use pencil to make beautiful comics, however this comic is why the business doesn't have a lot of successful pencil only art. The shading is bad. The worst. You can see the lines from the tile through his body. If you are going to use pencils only learn how to make it look like you're not. Blacks are done best in ink or with alot of photoshop work. None is present here. The plot. . .isn't. . .there. As it's been already said, unreadable. Random nudity? Why? I love tits and I can't figure that out... like is this whole comic a terrible inside joke? Well I'm not laughing. Bad. Fail.
-BP
Dala - big fail for using the 'How to draw Manga battles' book for a few spots in your fight. Too bad you couldn't put up more of a challenge, I guess now we'll see if you come up with a new character, eh?
Rtv - goooood stuff man, loved the angles. Some of the proportions were off, but it was a good read. Nice work.
Rtv! pretty much rocked this one out. The first three pages were beautifully done, and I love the little touchups to Estrella's outfit. He never lost consistancy in his linework and the action was pretty (if I may say so) fukkin' dynamic. I dunno where Dala's top row of teeth went in panel seven of the last page, but this was a pretty solid entry on Rtv!'s have. Good to have you back, man.
Dala, I don't know what to say. This comic was the equivilant of reading nothing. I couldn't tell what in the hell was going on through the whole thing, and it took me a moment to realize the dude with the sword was Dalarminus. I don't know what Lina was doing there or why you felt the need to tear off her shirt suddenly, or what the hell Rtv! was up to or what the 'fukk' happened to him at the end. It was all very sloppy and unreadable.
This i can finish, i used all the time i could. The fact i MIGHT not finish colouring could just be me trying to be too perfect, the inking is allright.
This time around there is less complexity in the stories and we finally get to see more action. Kinda like my first fight.
There are no outside events blocking me, i am free to beat the crap outta SOME people i know!
I won't say any names....
like Caanan, Felony, Pon..
But first let me cheat death. This shit is serious, lol.
Well one of us has to, it was promised two years ago when we supposedly betrayed all of you. That was some funny shit, i thought i was gonna get banned. This fight is making up for it and also a comeback for either of us. We accept the high stakes and the consequenses. Our reputation isn't that shiny either. So i'm excited lol
Well Dingo, since the SDT i've been waiting to fight you. I fukked up somewhere with 0roch1.
I'm not in the mood to send challenges and wait for acceptance or rejection. So anyone that wants to fight me after this, send me a challenge..i accept immediatly..
(taking advantage of three of the seven days upfront off course;)
I'm staying. I miss my fukking enemies. and
I miss fukking my enemies.
Glad to be back. A great practical joke would be hyping this up and then default. hahahaha
I'm just kidding, don't get nervous.
Exactly. Wow. It's like when you lost your glasses and can't find them and youy look all over the places and instead you find and old watch and your like \"wow cool, but then almost right after you find your glasses and your like \"sweet\" and then the glases and watch decide to fight to the death. Heh.
i still haven't fought you yet Rtv!!!! (and long time no see) XD
and Dala, i still want that re-match >:3
you guys are comin' back and staying, right? *beg* ^^;
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