Nice battle! I enjoyed Delyas twist at the end, and how Oz hadn't turned into a werewold for once. And Jackster had that classic cartoon style about his plot. Can't help but love that.
As far as quality, I'd have to say, both of you have great style. I loved the various perspectives that Jackster put into his comics, and he did very well in keeping with the classic cartoon style. Though, I've always loved Del's unique style.
Creativity was good for both. I like how Del keeps putting Nowhere boy in her comics. And I loved how Jackster continued the plot.
I'll give this to Del, but I can't vote...soooo...a vote for both. XD;
\"Oz wasn't mean. He was defending Nowhere Boy's honor. Ha.\"
\"That's exactly what I was thinking! Oz is a smarty pants after all.\"
Yes, exactly! :D NB is his friend...kinda.. D: So he was like \"Hey that's not cool.\" and stuff. I'm awake, trust me.
And thanks for that, FoO. <3 I love your art, too. Can't wait to see ya at ComiCon. ;0
yo. . this was awesome both of you. . .
jackster dude. .LOVE yur stuff. . .nutty is a perfect character . . very relatable. brings me back to bein a kid and thinkin animaniacs was the shiz.
Delya. .yur style. . .just. . . . . .i have an art crush on you. . .yur style is amazing. . . i love it.
entertainment wise i think both were great. while both held a nice pace i think i started to linger on delyas just because it seemed really stationary. . which isnt bad. .but my A.D.D. started to kick in a bit with the lack of movement. .
and jackster i really like where yur story is leading. i liked the flash back to the other fight. both have potential to become awesome if ever added to.
so entertainment i gave jackster the slight nod, and delya for quality. i got mad respect tho for both of you. keep it up!
-FoO
Jackster- Nutty's hilarious. I love the idea of him, and his monocrhrome color scheme. I've been meaning to get more into culture and such in the 20's, and Nutty and our style gives me more the reason to do so. I enjoyed your comic thoroughly, though I didn't see it so much as a battle. You work excellently with expressions, and I really liked how you recreated the Nex vs. ROK battle. Excellent work and I hope it only keeps getting better!
Delya- DAMN, just DAMN. Oz's insults really made this fight unique, seeing as rather than a fist fight, you had words damaging Nutty's dignity and self esteem. WOOSH. Damaging a man's (albeit a furry XD) dignity is one of the worse tings you can do, no? Isee you used the sperm font again. Haha, another job well done and I hope your future battles will be just as entertaining, if not, more!
Love the work, guys :3
Oz wasn't mean. He was defending Nowhere Boy's honor. Ha.
Anywho, pretty close battle between the both of ya. I always love Jackster's title cards and the character in general. However, as he had said somewhere in these comments, he didn't go all out and it feels somewhat like that. Don't get me wrong, I'm curious to see where Nutty and Oz's adventures would take them and was entertained by the small jokes thrown in there. However it didn't carry that typical punch that was needed.
Delya's on ther otherhand avoids the punch entirely and goes straight for the neck and rips out the jugular. The art seems a bit stronger in this one, though I can't put my finger as to why. There are a few panels (and that one page) where I wish the dialog was broken up a bit. Maybe provide some visuals to carry the dialog along....ew. Scratch that.
wow dam that was mean but that could actully become part of void over all story line why patty hates anthros so much hehe i do think the best storie lines are concived in silly
jacster as always love your style i found z lovly ansrove the opening
As I've said in the past, I don't take advice from people with no real experience in the field. So, finish up your VOID stuff, get battling, and then maybe I'll change my mind about the \"grain of salt\" deal. ;)
:3
Jackster: I love your character. There's nothing more fun than a retired black an' white cartoon squirrel, especially one as zany as Nutty. As for the battle itself, the flow of events is pretty decent, definately above average. B;s, straight across the board - once I get up and running with a fighter, I hope to challenge ya. 83
Delya: Oz is an extremely likeable character, no doubt. And for once, I'm glad we didn't see him go wolf in a battle. It's a great power and all, but the show of wits here is delightfully more entertaining. The way this battle flows pushes me to grin - poor Nutty didn't stand a chance. Oz was so cruel, but then again, so was Nutty to have made a comment like that. The crowd illustations were humorous, especially the cameos an' the wild-eyed Nex popping in there as well. Scattered scores, impressed I am. :3
Well done, both of you. <3
Wow. Good battles on both sides. But I actually feel kinda bad for Nutty in this one, just because he treated Oz so nicely in his comic, but in Oz's comic he gets ripped apart. But I guess, although it was a bit harsh, I'd give the battle to Oz. I mean, they WERE pretty good burns.
I enjoyed both comics...
Jackster: Artwise, you'll always be on par with the top dogs on void dude, but... this really doesn't look up to your standards dude, I really think you could of gone all out for this match mang, but story and quality are still top notch.
Delya: You're so mean! MEAN LADY!! I honestly think you could of done more as well, but I think storywise you have this in the bag.
I hope to see you two fight again soon, but I'm giving my vote to delya this time dude.
WHY THAT DOUBLE-CROSSING SON OF A BITCH DISNEY RODENT!!! The mouse really DID stole Nutty's spotlight after all.
But Nutty making out with a guy on tape? Tha-tha-that's not right at all...... o.O
Dude, Stoney...the story isn't gonna unfold itself in one comic. XD I like to take my time and mess around a bit, sorry if I don't meet-up to your \"storyline whore\"ishness. So I'll just take what you say with a grain of salt until I can see what YOU can come-up with as far as comics go. o; Which I do hope to see sometime soon.
Jackster: Great comic from you, as usual, although the title didn't really make sense. o_O The dialogue exchange in the middle kind of confused me, but I could tell what was happening. XD Great use of overhead perspective in this one. My guess is that you're planning on using Oz in your Beyond Battle?
Delya: Uh... wow. You were right. That WAS mean. XDD Oz fights dirty... and he didn't even turn into a werewolf in this battle. It was funny, but I think you stretched it out a little too much... I kept expecting Nutty to actually DO something. Your panels were well-drawn (especially your backgrounds) and I loved Nex's random appearence (he seems to be doing that a lot on Void XDD). Overall, I liked your comic, but I'm hoping to see a little more action and plot development from you. ._. I dunno, call me a storyline whore, I guess. XD;;
Great comics from both of you, but my vote goes to Jackster. Sorry, Delz~ °x°;;
I appreciate your input GPCI, but the insulting of Nutty stopped at page 8... not page 9. ;P If your gonna critique, you should get your facts in order.
Alright.. here's the low down..
Quality: Jackster; you get a B+. Because you ARE a great artist and I always love those 20's style cartoon intros you do for title pages and the way you draw your opponents! We need to battle once I get my character sheets and stuff.
Delya; You get an A. Sorry if this seems unfair, but I found the illustrations to be just a TEENSY bit better. Andwho, You get round one. 8D
Creativity. This is a tie of B+. I can see both of you thought up some neat storylines for your.. Uh, \"battles\". Insult war, ftw ecks dee.
Entertainment: Jackster gets the B+ for this one. I found it quite entertaining and the way you could continue this storyline. You and Del should try writing a Beyond Battle based off this or soemthing.
Delya: A B. You get a B. Though you found some clever insults, it kinda got old by page 9. For me anyways. D: But still, the Abortion Clinic thing had me. Just the Delya randomness I needed to finish the battle. J-pop is always fun to make fun of!
The final summary: A 1-1 tie! Good job from all of you! Battle ya later!
~The GP
the question is, who wouldnt want the detective in all his star-shooting crotch greatness?...... but that was a good little touch.... i enjoyed both of them....
Juuusssttt finished. ¦D
And I'd like to say in advance, Jackster- don't take any personal offence. XD You too, Dawgmastas. ...that is, unless you want to. ;0 *winkwink*
Uploaded mine.
I didn't really put much effort into this comic due to the SDT. I'm also saving most of my strength for my Dolly vs. Squishington battle and my Beyond Battle.
Okay, I was upset by the notion that people were thinking I've been cheating by getting biased votes through my dA journals.
Galvo proved them wrong by pointing out that there has been NO bad voting. So I'm returning and this fight is still on.
Sorry, I'm done here.
Cancel this battle if you want or leave it up and take a default. I've already addressed my opponent so they know what's going on.
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