if you would like me to go over errors in your perspective ill do so but in person. you know how to get a hold of me kura:p
on anther note nice work both of u i really enjoyed reading it
Nyah-hah, Mooo caught me. I'm a total Nadesico fanboy.
but seriously, I'd like to hear exactly wha you guys think is wrong with the artwork. Spaceninja mentioned something wrong with the faces. I must have missed it last time so I ask again, what is wrong with the faces (besides it being anime)? If i dont know then im gonna keep making the same mistakes.
Man Kura, that was a fun read, and the missile barrage did look cool, great job with the special effects and especially the mechs!
Sixtem, not shabby (if a bit brief) and a bit of depth in your writing, I like it. That last page is a little funky though...(what was already said about him lookiing like he's standing and not falling, the perspective being a bit off with his size, etc.) but I liked how well that simple cityscape worked (I'd be afraid of detailing it too much and losing the focus of the image...)
Kura: Nice work. I think I would've like it more if I was familiar with the anime/manga this was an homage of (I know I've heard the names used for the mechas in passing). I saw a ton of effort in the art. Even if you have some of your usual problems with faces nothing looked half assed.
Sixtem: The art was alright but it was too brief. I'm not sure why you felt you needed a cover page for a comic so short. I would've prefered a fourth sequential page. On the last page he looks like he's standing on the building and has grown huge, not like he's being thrown back with the building in the background.
Kura, I dig the alternate universes, keep doing them. The art was definitely good stuff, but the story left something to be desired. Maybe it just wasn't long enough, but it didn't build up enough of my interest or investment. Still, it was very clever.
Sixtem, the art was pretty good, although it seemed rough in places. The story I think you could have done more with, though. Solid fight.
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