Kura: besides the minor lacking of quality on the first page, I really enjoyed your comic. the win/not lose teacup thing is a trick I love to see used.
Mamoru: Everyone will tell you it's awesome, so will I. A lot of internal monolouge and it feels like he wouldn't normally have the time for it, but otherwise. Awesome.
Quality took a bit of a dive from both of your previous work, but I suppose it's expected with such a short deadline, so I'm not going to hold it against you. Nothing much to say about either, except that I'm very much looking forward to the future of both storylines.
Looks like I read out of order lol. Mamoru, your story for this one was great. Mize's expression at the end was priceless. Great art, even though it slumped a bit towards the end. But heck, most people probably wouldn't even be able to do that well considering you did three battles in one week!
Kura, watch out for lopsided faces! Ouch! Otherwise, I enjoyed your comic. Veronica feels like the personification of elegance the way you portrayed her. Also, the alcohol stench made me laugh.
I'm 'spectin' no defaults here, my friends. If you do... well, I got nothin' yet, but maybe when Ancelin gets submitted I'll have something to threaten with...
Allez-vous!
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