whey i liked your angles, they flow nicely. except for the one where mjolinir appears on the 2nd page, it doesnt seem like hes making any trouble or anything, but i concluded that he was from the buzzer saying 'CLEANUP' anyways, last panel on the 3rd page where mopman is jumping to attack mojolinir could have been alot more dynamic and cool, if you had picked a more suitable angle, either have it from behind moppy, or behin mjolinir, or fisheye it, or anything else, it was a bit plain.
oh and work on you battles more you SLACKER!!! ILL CUT YOU SOME SLACK THIS TIME JUST BECAUSE YOU LOOK LIKE ROB ZOMBIE!
red: more background, more action, more pages, more fight, more story!
I would ask that people be more harsh with thier reviews here....I really need to hear the bad stuff if I am going to improve....critical review and pointers would be much appreciated
well as always I didn't have enough time to spare....and to be honest didn't have enough 'get up and go juice' on this one.....otherwise I may have been able to squeeze more outta myself... as always I wish it could have been better cuz I know I'm capable of a lot better
but there were improvements on this one....at least fer me if not for you
hopefully I can find someone else to challenge or to challenge me while I still have the itch so I can keep going on with it
wei: this one is finished not the best you can do but, still that Wei's feeling we all love...
red: man hmm how about some background next time? and again you can do alot better..
pretty rushed work to me, you guys did something and thats counts in my book... My vote goes to Wei...
I can't wait to see what new artistic avenue red2z explores with this one. Wei, I'm hoping that dispite being busy, you won't leave any blank panels in this one. Good luck the two of you!
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