JinguJ - I've been meaning to post a comment for a while, but I just wanted to say that I love how you portrayed the encounter between Iri and my demon. The whole thing has a dream-like texture to it, which fits the theme of the Dream Marble.
I was having trouble with finding enough story meat, since I kept changing my vision for this battle until late in the game.
I hope exams went well for you, and thanks for an enjoyable battle!
Both of these are spectacular. They're two different styles...but both styles, though evoking different emotions, portray the characters' personalities very well.
One thing I had with Iri's - I love the emotions and the storyline, but I would have loved to have seen the actual -action.- Siya has great motion...and a playfulness. It seems like Iri's is way more adult. I really love them both....
I have to say, the mediums were completely different so they are hard to compare. The story line in Iri's was, let's just say a bit confusing. The art was beautiful, well done for something last minute. Only major problem was the entertainment. It didn't grab me and take me somewhere, it just wasn't exciting. I really wish we had been able to see some kind of actual battle, rather than building more storyline.
Siya's was artistic, but comic-booky all the same. I loved your depiction of Iri, and I love Marc and Siya. The story line was entertaining,and it kept me wanting more.
All in all both had their strengths and their weaknesses. However my vote was more in favor of Siya than with Iri. Good luck to both of you, may the best battle win!
Marc and Siyas MaryGoRound effect was Kickass. Art was thourough as well.
But my votes went to Iri 'Cause the Story tellin' was Phenomenal! Iris' art could have been cleaner but I still rated it at a B+ for the dictumn that the medium Compilation works well with the emotional backdrop of the progressive sitchation.
Both artist were however rated generally above the average markum. Diligent work my fried ends.
Ohhh, so Siya didn't default after all... good good, I gladly retract my earlier statement... well most of it, don't anybody default otherwise your score goes down the tubes!
Siya: Looks pretty good artisticly, but entertainment wise you could of done alot more with this, but other than that, this is a good first fight, welcome to void!
Jj: For a rush job, the art really isn't so bad, you could have done better, but you could have also done much worse. I think it's pretty decent though. However, I'm not exactly certain what's going on, so I can't rate it high for entertainment.
I'm dissapointed that we don't get to see the other half of this fight, but hopefully we'll see them in action soon enough.
Man... there needs to be something done about new kids getting in and defaulting on there first fight... for those who plan on fighting in void, remember, a default not only damages your score and gives you an F grade, it also puts a black mark on your reliability record! Nobody wants to fight somebody who'll just default and waste your drawing time!
Siya: I hope you can make up for this somehow...
Jing: You're crazy girl... taking up this fight while fighting in armageddon, I admire your strengh girl, and I'm glad you didn't default! I know you wanted to quit badly, but to me it seems like you just don't want to huh? Anywho, not the best quality from you, but still... this comic has it's almost tranquill look to it, must be the way you use those water colors... Anywho, pretty good so far jing. Loving the story as well, kinda sad in a way looking back at that beyond battle.
Anywho, keep it up or something jing. Good luck with armageddon.
uploadeded, sorry for the quality guys, I totally forgot about this until like, 5 hours before deadline. :\\ i just dont wanna default, though I think it turned out pretty ok.
thanks jonas, that boost me up. I am in verge of defaulting because I have lots to do for college, but I'll try to submit something, at least. :) thanks.
Yeah i have to agree that Marc and Siya have got to be by far, the creepiest and yet seemingly worth watching characters on this entire site. When i get my fighter up in the near future i may want to see what their made of........... Good luck you adorable little psycopaths!!!! ^_^
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