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Aixa vs Veronica Nightingale

4 Weeks
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Aixa vs Veronica Nightingale
By Izzy
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Aixa
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Final Score: 8.12
Aixa vs Veronica Nightingale
By Majikura
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Veronica Nightingale
Final Score: 7.21

Comments (23)

Snakemeat's avatar
Snakemeat
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19 years ago
O'M'-God, Cat Fight! Where does my skin crawl?...

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jv7x
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19 years ago
Both scripts were great and very original; I was very amused. Kura: Great approach. Your comic had a bite to it that poked at Void and your opponent. I thought it well done and it's commendable that you decided to take this on, on top of BR. Stuff to work on when you have more time are, more consistant line weights, anatomy and more backgrounds. Good job. Izzy: Backgrounds, backgrounds, backgrounds. The characters are great but the lack of backgrounds was just crippling the story and brought down my enjoyment alot. Aside from backgrounds (have I said that enough?) you should also work on format. I know most folks don't pay it too much attention but it's important. Format your page, make it easy to read and have it accent your work. Use format to play to your stregnths. Look at some comics and get a feel for how those guys build pages. Every page has an \"anchor\" that grounds the page and really nails it home. Presentation goes a long way in keeping your reader. To your credit, your script had me in stiches and that helped your score alot. \"That's what I'm Tolken about\" had me rollin' man. You get my vote. JV

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killa L
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19 years ago
When i clicked on this battle, I expected to be voting for Veronica, cause I've kinda become a fan, but Axia's comic was just too good. A Storm Trooper/Darth Vader appearance? Fugettabouttit!

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Furious Nick
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19 years ago
Izzy's Aixa is crazy cool. Great battle people. Nice concept and execution by both parties.


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Izzy
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19 years ago
what?! me fail Engrish? but thats Umpossible. Yeah, and if i had the chance for someone to revise it i would have done so. anywho, ill focus on backgrounds next battle, since i keep ignoring them. thanks for the coments.


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Viperchief
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19 years ago
Izzy-Funny stuff, really enjoyed it. The Mech cameo made my day. Everything has already been said crit wise. Kura-Definite points for creativity, original way to hold a battle. Made me laugh pretty good in a few spots, completely understand the \"hastiness\" of it, BR is a definite priority. I liked it.

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Majikura
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19 years ago
truth to be told....aside from 'it was rushed' not much has really been said about mine.

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Y2Jenn
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19 years ago
Izzy- Oh, jeebus! Oh, man... ow, my sides hurt. The Mechanic's cameo KILLED me! It was perfect. Absolutely perfect. I have to agree with those who have said you need an editor, work on backgrounds and try different angles. I dig your style. It's got a lot of personality to it. I absolutely enjoyed reading your battle. Good stuff. Kura- I can't say much about yours that hasn't already been said. I've seen better from you. Amusing story though! It got me smilin. :) Good job to the both of yas!


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C Lefebvre
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19 years ago
Izzy: Funny. Original. Art is ok. Nice work. Kura: I alos enjoyed yours, even thought it seemed a little rushed. I liked the roughness of it though. I gave it to Axia thought, because hers was more creative. Hard choice. Good job both of you.

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(Pi)
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19 years ago
Funny stuff from both sides. Izzy - gotta get an editor. Get a friend, family member, stranger, whoever to give your comic a once over before submission. I'm positve that would have really cleaned up the lettering in this piece. Honestly, the poor grammar really killed the comic for me. On the other hand, aside from that, it was a very entertaining battle. The Mechanic cameo was sweet, and the nerds v. nerds commentary was very amusing. I must say, however, that your action scenes could use some work. The last three panels of page 5 were all done from the same angle at a complete profile of the fight. Toss in dynamic perspectives, I've seen you use them before. Lastly, I'm pretty sure it was a bit rushed, from the lack of backgrounds, but still an impressive battle. Kura - funny battle to be sure, and it looks like you kept it within your abilities. Standard fight, nothing spectacular, though. Good luck with Battle Royale.

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ESG
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19 years ago
Izzy, your artwork is beautiful and your scripting is amusing. However, I really think you should start trying to push yourself. Add some backrounds, and pay closer attention to your spelling. Several words were missing letters - a simple mistake that reflects badly on your work overall. Kura - you were rushing, it shows. The script was amusing though and I enjoyed reading it.

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Izzy
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19 years ago
DUDE i like totally wanted to use that beach volley ball bit for another fight, ah fuck it, im still using it. good fight there Kura, we were in the geek zone, eh? I apologize for all the missing details on veronica, i like tottally forgot to shade her hair. and now that i think about it i should have turn up the contrast a bit. oh well. good fight.

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Majikura
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19 years ago
omg Izzy man, that made my day. I dunno WHY we both decided to use geeks in our comics but this is gonna be a fun one indeed. *thumbsup*

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Wei Ingnan
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19 years ago
Izzy has purchased an extension...one week

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Majikura
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19 years ago
Uploaded. 2 down, 10 more to go. 0_0 I'll admit this isn't my best work, but I can't afford to lose precious time for BR. Enjoy Izzy's fight everyone.

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Live or Die
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19 years ago
Post deleted by Toast because the user is a fucking tool.

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Drifter Ronin
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19 years ago
Aixa....Veronica.....hotness.....nuff said.

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Monday
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19 years ago
TOO HAWT FOR CHILDREN ! TOO COOL FOR VOID :D

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Izzy
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19 years ago
whoa. didnt noticed this till now. i assume that you wouldnt take the challenge cuase you already had a fight. alright then. let the Catfight begin. XD

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Majikura
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19 years ago
If I wasn't forced to check muy email, I wouldn'tve seen this coming. This should be interesting.