Endjoi- What I thought about this has pretty much already been said. The Quality was D+ the + was for the fact that it at least told a continuous idea for a story. but you cant say that a crazy epic battle happened if your not gonna show it. And whats goin on in that panel at the bottom right of pg 2? D+ on creativity. their wasnt really anything to make this a memorable comic for me. D on entertainment. Sorry but i wasnt feelin this at all. I dont hate ya Im just a harsh critic.
Mize- Lookin pretty good but also very unfinished. I know that you got a lot of work goin on fer yerself but i aint throwin a curve. C+ for quality. You could of at least used more black to make it look a lil more completed but i understand that this is good pencil work though. B- Creativity cuz your layouts are hot. overall entertainment is a C, in my opinion.
good work guys.
I guess what with the battle load Mize has it was as if he only had a week or two to work on it before turning to his other pending battles. Ha ha are you gonna chain all these together Mamoru? That would be a feat
Endjoi might've just had other things to do like... registering a new vehicle at the DMV then finding out you need a title for vehicles older than 1980 in your state, contacting the title service, and then there's that test in Calculus 8 tomorrow, and the guy from your bank called saying there's a problem with your mortgage, etc. etc.
Endjoi - this is just so rushed, i wasn't sure how to vote. It was entertaining, I liked the cameos, and you can certainly tell that there is skill behind the sketches. However, it is really poor quality, especially for a month. I hope to see a more complete battle from you in the near future.
Mize - I suppose yours was pretty unfinished as well, but the story was highly engaging. I'm glad that you've thought of a way to link all your battles together, and I hope this means you have more time to plan and execute your upcoming battles.
Okay they were both reasonably entertaining, but I couldn't give either of you high marks on quality, especially considering the four week drawing time it was somewhat of a letdown. Regardless, they were both decent reads.
hey nice Kommeradical, I love it!! XD
Viper: Actually, page 2 is missing..and the second to the last page is also missing hence why I know what you mean by rough edges here and there.
Haha, love the continuation of my story. Great stuff. Though it looked a bit rough in places its certainly understandable with the work load you've taken on.
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