Lol, I love your comic J, It was good all around. That tampon thinig brought tears of joy into my room. When you ares were attached to that chick, everyone in the room laughed again. Keep up the good work.
This was originally supposed to be longer, but I had to cut it short due to time, and I just threw on the ending when I found out about the arm collecting thing.
And thanks for the crits, it's really appreciated.
Oh, and now that I can finally read stilled life's side. It's really hot. I like it :D
Ooooookey dokey.
J-Pop - Okay, the Vincent reference was mean...but...it kinda made me grin. The tampon thing was gross, and the ending was gross, but honestly, I'm not exactly shocked. Not bad overall, I liked the effort in the pages.
Kyra - babe...what the heck? I could barely tell what was going on most of the time, and the ending made no sense! I'm sorry sugar, but I was just completely lost.
j-pop: wicked dude!
you should put my time into faces clothings... blood looks almost black, not so \"candy-red\" It was rather nice...
kyla: seein yer previous work, i can see IMPROVEMNT here girl, i gotta say i miss the poncho...
draw 'till yer wrist hurts!
wow, funny stuff on both sides!
J-pop, you had an awesome twist (pun!) at the end, so you get the entertainment score from me. However, stilled_life wins out in quality and creativity with sheer number of cameos!
Great entries, guys, hope to see more.
Wow, cameos in both! The way this is going, I bet I'll be in your next comic too, J-Pop.
Okay, Crits for the J-man: you never go wrong with x'ed out eyes and large quantities of blood. There were a couple of parts that were awkward, and the first two pages didn't really seem to have anything to do with the story - but I laughed anyway.
Kyra: Page two of your comic has some stuff going on, J-Pop's arms mysteriously dissapear in that bottom panel... but you had people shooting at a bird so that makes up for the puzzlement you had beparted upon me.
Yes, this is going to rock! We are very close in our standing, with about the same experience/grade/points (you are about .4 points higher). I guess it is who ever works harder!
no defualts here!
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