synje: the panels hurt me man, where's the ink and shading? you had time i know you did...your slackin' and you proved it by letting crazy samarai do all the dirty work for you.
bronxy: you rushed it too good style though, the story that you put into to it can be developed epically as well. oh yeah no more cheesy descriptions of what ur opponent is doing
kudos all around though:)
NICE!
Synje, I've never read your work before, but this wasn't half bad. I wasn't too keen on the plot, and sad to find out that you'd turned the comic out in a day, but that's how deadlines work... sorta. One thing you could do next time, if you're pressed like you were this time, is to shade in sections of \"shadow\" instead of marking them with x's like you're inking.
Bronx, you're officially on my hitlist. GUM actually looked wet and gloopy--that's awesome! Also, your choreography is much more interesting than your first battle. I like your inks, and how you give a sense of space to where the characters are interacting. Like most, though, I was pretty disappointed in seeing the last three panels of the comic being a pretty basic cut-and-paste.
Synje: Disappointing. At least you didn't default, though.
Rampage: Pretty slick but why did you explain an action in a word box that could have easily been a panel? (Gum growing to 2x size.) Also the fact that the last three panels are Ctrl C/Ctrl V was kind of disappointing.
Iiiinteresting! Gum - yours was...well kinda boring..looks like you ran out of time, and stuck Crazy Samurai in there for..what purpose? Either way, I like your lines, just need more effort!
Rampage - me likies. Great inkwork, interesting use of action, I just found it hard to follow. It wasn't so much a story within itself as a continuation off of something else entirely. Still though, I liked it, good job.
Well I uploaded w/ 3 minutes left, I rush the shit out of it. I didnt have as much free time as I thought, sry Synje for sorta half assing this. But is better than a default!
I'm really liking Rampage, Bronx. Think I'll be adding him to my hitlist. Kick some ass you guys. Kill that default trend that's infecting this place lately.
Good luck to you guys. I'm excited about this newby fight. I like both your styles and the story should be interesting as well. Don't hold anything back guys...
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