Saavy's Incubator!

Saavy's Incubator!
« on: Apr 18, 2017, 12:58 PM »
Alright, about time I make an incubator!

Lady Cadenza

In a dimension tied with that of earth, an isolated city of music personified had emerged. Within the tall soundproof walls of the city-state, Humanoids and sentient instruments live together in districts. Each district is made of musical genres with Classical Music in the center of the city as the ruling genre. As time pasts, Music evolves and so do the citizen's taste. Now, the ruling class is facing a large scale civil war as everyone wants territory for their ever growing list of sub genres.

Cadenza is the daughter of the current ruler and the only one in her family that cares about the situation at hand. Feeling at a loss, she turns to forbidden magic to find a solution. In the process, she accidentally opens portals all over void city that leads to Music City(name subject to change??). Now, she scrambles to hop in and out of void city to manually close the portals before unwanted guest start showing up.

Not sure how much information is too much information lol. I think Music City could use a bit more reference so others can use it if they want to do battle there.

Re: Saavy's Incubator!
« Reply #1 on: Apr 19, 2017, 11:05 AM »
I agree that more information on the city is needed but also i feel like we need to know more on how her magic works as well. Well overall this seems interesting and fun.

Re: Saavy's Incubator!
« Reply #2 on: Apr 19, 2017, 09:29 PM »
She's cute as hell, I love the whole concept.

As for the amount of information, keep it short, if possible. What you have written is perfect so far. You can show her personality and demonstrate her powers in your intro pages. Keep going with this!

Re: Saavy's Incubator!
« Reply #3 on: Apr 20, 2017, 09:35 AM »
I am loving this character! Now give me comix, dammit!

Re: Saavy's Incubator!
« Reply #4 on: Apr 20, 2017, 03:30 PM »
Music themed characters are an absolute OK in my book.

And you've just made my hitlist. >8U

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