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News & Events / New Character: Kot
« Last post by Staff Bot on Sep 19, 2018, 10:18 PM »
Lyme created a new character - Kot
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Art Jams / Re: Post Apocalypse Jam: Redux (CAUTION: NSFW 18+ INSIDE)
« Last post by Shen on Sep 17, 2018, 10:52 PM »
I did this really super fast so its a big ugly, but



Watcha need? guns? ammo? women? water? a ride? Ghost can it it for you, for a price.
The desert landscape has damaged his vampire skin though, so whatever you need, i hope its at night.
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Art Jams / Re: Post Apocalypse Jam: Redux (CAUTION: NSFW 18+ INSIDE)
« Last post by ArtsandGoodies on Sep 17, 2018, 09:30 PM »
Here's Harlow Post Apocalypse

Feels sad man
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Art Jams / Re: Post Apocalypse Jam: Redux (CAUTION: NSFW 18+ INSIDE)
« Last post by Astrodile on Sep 17, 2018, 07:13 PM »
Can I just say I live for doomsday salesman Niles

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Art Jams / Re: Post Apocalypse Jam: Redux (CAUTION: NSFW 18+ INSIDE)
« Last post by Majikura on Sep 17, 2018, 01:26 PM »
been listening to a lot of Fallout New Vegas lore

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Art Jams / Re: Post Apocalypse Jam: Redux (CAUTION: NSFW 18+ INSIDE)
« Last post by SirJellyRaptor on Sep 17, 2018, 08:30 AM »
A doodle is a doodle and this thread is old but HEY NILES IS HERE

Despite everyone's suffering he's actually...Pretty jovial? Certainly flourishing compared to the others, beit in positive spirit or in supplies. If asked why, he'd just say "It's because I don't belong in this heap of shit." Others efforts may be to save whoever they can, survive, etc. etc., he's more focused on benefiting himself through 'reasonable' trade. No one really knows where he gets all his stuff, but hey, he has it and it's for sale so what's the problem? 


Ash, meanwhile, packed up her fuckin' bags and left the universe the moment the first warning signs popped up. So we can just assume she's fine and happy and at home with her family right now.

Can I just say I live for doomsday salesman Niles
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Art Jams / Re: Post Apocalypse Jam: Redux (CAUTION: NSFW 18+ INSIDE)
« Last post by Astrodile on Sep 17, 2018, 02:20 AM »
A doodle is a doodle and this thread is old but HEY NILES IS HERE

Despite everyone's suffering he's actually...Pretty jovial? Certainly flourishing compared to the others, beit in positive spirit or in supplies. If asked why, he'd just say "It's because I don't belong in this heap of shit." Others efforts may be to save whoever they can, survive, etc. etc., he's more focused on benefiting himself through 'reasonable' trade. No one really knows where he gets all his stuff, but hey, he has it and it's for sale so what's the problem? 


Ash, meanwhile, packed up her fuckin' bags and left the universe the moment the first warning signs popped up. So we can just assume she's fine and happy and at home with her family right now.
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THE INCUBATOR / Re: SilverBlaze's Incubation pod
« Last post by ArtsandGoodies on Sep 14, 2018, 09:54 PM »
Just wondering how this sounds, if there's anything I can make sound better.
Since page 3 is currently the page that's not yet been re-sketched, there's chance to design it much better. The current script that's posted here is already the redesigned page script, so it's generally what I'm looking for. I just want to know if it can be improved in some way.

Spoiler: show

PAGE [3] (Pichi's room) (resketch page, dialogue needs work)
  • Panel 1 (Pichi punches the wall)
    • Pichi: “Bitch!”

  • Panel 2 (Cat Butler hands Pichi her coat)
    • Pichi: “She’s a fool for being so complacent.”

  • Panel 3+4 (Pichi puts on her coat and stops in front of the door)
    • Pichi: “Our numbers are declining. Our resources are low.”
       - “I can not trust her to make the right choices anymore.”

  • Panel 5 (Pichi turns her head)
    • Pichi: “If I don’t leave now, everything will be lost.”
       - “Please take care of mother.”
    • Cat Butler: “Of course Ma’am.”

  • Panel 6+7+8 ({Vertical pannels} camera pans from in front of Pichi, over her head as she looks up to the sky and leads to the final page angle)
    • Pichi: (thought) “She wants everything to stay the same…”
       - “The world does not listen to wants…”
       - “But... maybe a wish…”


See previous pages for context.

All I could say is maybe a couple of those panels could be combined in terms of dialogue like panels 3+ 4 could be one panel of a dynamic shot of her putting on a coat as she walks out also separating the final 3 panels make the dialogue sound awkward just think of those taking the same time as the time between other panels and speaking it with that time gap sounds a tiny bit weird. But honestly that's a bit pedantic and there are no crippling story issues you need to worry about, Its a good cohesive story and we get to see the characters motivation for why they end up at void. However overall I will say the story is the least important part of the intro, so long as your panels are organized right and the font you are using is readable and bubbles decent you should be set. The intro is mainly a showcase of all the technical skills that you can consistently draw a character and backgrounds, I think you may also need a more humanoid character in the intro just to show you can do humans. But I think you could just make the butler that and be set.
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News & Events / Nothin vs. Mister Kent now online!
« Last post by Staff Bot on Sep 14, 2018, 05:34 PM »
Nothin vs. Mister Kent is now online for reading, voting, and critiquing.
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New here? / Re: INTRODUCE YOURSELF
« Last post by MightyMayhem on Sep 14, 2018, 04:38 PM »
Thank you Desichan, I appreciate your time answering my question. Your explanation is very clear. I'll check out the social media links and the discord server!

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