I don't know how much of this is me looking for feedback and how much of it is my insatiable urge to show people every step of the process of creating a project I'm liking to get instant gratification before I actually finished it, BUT! Here's the pair I plan to submit!
Basically, Invyn (he/him) is a self-titled warlock who works entirely through drawing magic circles and is characterized mainly by being incredibly apathetic, and Jasper (he/him or
it) is his pumpkin minion who is very much not
apathetic. In fights, Jasper would probably be the main opponent, while Invyn stays more as support, even though he's technically the mastermind here.
Now, these are
characters I've had designed before I found out about this site... but not by very long. Or at least, I've barely drawn them, so they might as well be Entervoid Originals™. I hope then that they seem original enough design-wise!
I assume I'm not intrinsically gifted in the art of comic composition, so I also have the sketches of the first two pages of their intro comic below to be criticized. The speech is all blotted out because, even though I want
to show it off, I'm sure spoiling the entire comic before it's posted isn't really the most accepted thing to do here, judging from the stickied read-before-posting post here.
(Before you mention it, the second bubble in the second page points off to the right intentionally, because it's meant to be Jasper saying that. It's not just that I messed up the tail.)
Thanks for looking this over!