Heavyweight Tournament 2005: Semifinals / Charlie vs. Indigo

Heavyweight Tournament 2005: Semifinals — Charlie vs. Indigo

by sheldon


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Viperchief
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# 27   Posted: Apr 4 2005, 05:47 AM
Damn, that\'s some quality work on both accounts.  The dialogue in Shelde\'s was fantastic, bummed it didnt get finished.

Impressive stuff, now I see just how high the bar is set here.

Phill
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# 26   Posted: Apr 1 2005, 11:35 PM
I completely forgot to vote and comment earlier!

Shelde: Well, I can\'t give you as many points in Quality as I\'d like too seeing as how you didn\'t finish, but it\'ll still be a high score for that area. I really liked the direction you were going with this, a more serious story I felt would of been perfect against Indigo and I was right about that it seems. But unfortunetly I do wish to have seen this finished, maybe a beyond battle would be nice, I dunno, do what you want man.

Indigo: Also good! I really liked how you planned this thing out panel wise, especially the first couple of pages. You had a very good story, but it wasn\'t as emotional as Shelde\'s story, but it was defenetly a good read nontheless. I can\'t really say much man, except I really wish I could of faced you in the tourney, oh well, hope to see you next year.

You\'re both rocking void right now, don\'t stop or I\'ll get ya in your sleep! Keep it up or something?

Mistress Shade
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# 25   Posted: Apr 1 2005, 11:27 PM
Well, stpl maybe you were right.  It could still go either way and my vote ended up being dead even.  *Don\'t* let being right go to your head.  ;p

Quality- Shelde won out here.  I\'m going to have to side with Virulain on this one.  The text is just as important to the design of the page as the artwork.  Stpl you know this.  I know you know this.  \'Nuff said.

On a stylistic note (and I\'ll probably be shot for making such an observation), I noticed that stpl has applied a Shelde-esque way of colouring for this battle.  Was that deliberate?

Creativity- Point goes to the Master of Staples on this one.  Shelde was mared on this as he didn\'t fully finish.  I wasn\'t able to see the story\'s resolution or where it was going to go.  Please finish this as I\'d imagine the vote in this catagory would have been far more difficult.  BTW Stpl, I so get turned on when you use moral dillemmas in your plots.  Dealing in Uncertainty was one of my favourite works from you.

And lastly you both scored even on entertainment, but for different reasons.

starlock17
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# 24   Posted: Apr 1 2005, 01:44 PM
Alright alright this is some freakn\' good stuff man!  Stplmstr Iv\'e always been a fan of your work very stylized and original everytime and this fight was no exception. Shelde...AMAZING absolutely amazing it\'s pretty obvious that you have some pretty big stores of skill if that\'s what you call a rushed fight. For both of you, win or lose you should be proud to have gotten this far and hey...what doesn\'t kill you only makes you stronger. FIGHT!!

FanTa_DudE
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# 23   Posted: Apr 1 2005, 05:30 AM
BOTH WERE DAMN @#$% ELITE!!! Awesome directions & developments going down in both stories!! I would\'ve have undoubtedly given this to u  Shelde if u finished it. Surprising and refreshingly great character and emotion! Bravo to u Stpl with staging the moral melodrama! That\'s high-roller @#$%! I can only say art from both sides was equally flawless! Cream of the crop!! Cherry on top!!

Wyvern
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# 22   Posted: Mar 30 2005, 10:53 AM
Man...on both counts....this was just GLORIOUS (as Shelde would say).  FUUCK!

Virulain
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# 21   Posted: Mar 29 2005, 07:51 PM
Shelde: I wish you had finished, man. I had to knock you down on quality for that one--an unfinished product is far more dissatisfying than a To Be Continued. PLEASE continue this in another battle or in a beyond series. I\'m begging you. Your story flowed like oil through the beginning and your art is tight as all hell.

Stpl: The story was great but the dialogue stilted it--not BAD dialogue, just not quite natural (even for something forced like I\'m guessing you meant for it to be), especially from Indigo\'s end. I agree that you made a chilling Zeus--ROCK. I dislike the word bubble style you used, personally--I don\'t feel that they quite mesh with the scene and they cover more of the art than I think\'s just--but I liked the interruption of Zeus\'s rant by Indigo. That was sexy. The last thing I knocked you for was the misspellings and typos on the texting--it\'s just not the professional quality I expect from something finished by top battlers like you.

Sweet battles from both of you. In the end, the scores I gave you probably evened out point-wise.

jv7x
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# 20   Posted: Mar 29 2005, 02:38 AM
This battle shows why you are two of the BEST that Void has to offer.   These fights were amazing!  Stpl, you the man bro.  You came out swinging like a champ.  Shelde, you are one of the only fighters I know that can deliver a half finished battle and STILL rock like a sumb!tch!  High marks for you both, let someone else have to make the tuff call.  I can\'t do it.  JV

voodootattoon
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# 19   Posted: Mar 29 2005, 02:21 AM
You know as much as it sucks for Shelde to not finish,  It still was Amazing Quality,   Those Action scenes And Dialouge were amazing and packed with Creativity,  And I damn Sure was Entertained. That Goes for both you guys So Sorry but its All A\'s Across the board from me .  Deal with it

(Pi)
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# 18   Posted: Mar 29 2005, 01:42 AM
Jeebus Chriss.... this one\'s gonna go down in Void history...

Shelde: Ho. Lee. Shit. I don\'t think I\'ve EVER seen something so epic from you. You had me going right from the start, and probably would have had my vote if you finished it. F***ing EPIC, man.

Stplmstr: Switching up styles again? Can\'t say I\'m comfortable with the change, but maybe that\'s a good thing, especially taking into consideration the content of this fight. Wickedly dark on your side, man. That\'s the creepiest rendition of Zeus ever, and it flowed perfectly. Storyline was gold, art was gold, page ten IS gold. Straight A\'s, bro. You f***ing rock.

sheldon
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# 17   Posted: Mar 29 2005, 12:07 AM
fuckin JESUS STPL!??!?!


i\'m blown away/apart/in pieces. this was no doubt the most EPIC comic i have seen from you to date. it was no doubt perfect. if i voted on my own battles, then i qould give you triple fuckin A+ NO LESS. No doubt you deserved. fucking awesome mate.

\"i fucked your mum\".....PFFT WHATEVER!!

mr. robot
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# 16   Posted: Mar 28 2005, 09:41 PM
incredible stuff, both of you. hope you can budget your time well in future, sheld, because you could RULE THE WORLD WITH YOUR INCREDIBLE POWERS. And awesome color and akshun, stplman, i love the idea of zeus as a demonic little schizo-monster instead of a comic relief sidekick. i\'m going with indigo, but not by much.

jho
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# 15   Posted: Mar 28 2005, 06:57 PM
Oh yeah, my vote goes to stpl. Slick one man, very intense. Nice story going on, and very interesting take on charlie as well...

But sheld, I\'d love to see finished battle in this kind of atmosphere next time too. I hope to see more from you.

And this time, I really mean it.

jho
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# 14   Posted: Mar 28 2005, 06:45 PM
... wow

neat

shelde: wow. gotta keep an eye on charlie from now on.
stpl: the baloon words are kinda confusing, but ... wow too.

shit

damn you guys

Stplmstr
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# 13   Posted: Mar 28 2005, 12:35 AM
My doom aproaches.......dun dun dun.....hee hee hee this is gonna be sweet. I am uplaoded

jho
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485 comments
# 12   Posted: Mar 26 2005, 06:33 PM
thumbs up.

sheldon
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141 comments
# 11   Posted: Mar 25 2005, 07:08 PM
shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shit shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit......fuck

Kii
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# 10   Posted: Mar 15 2005, 11:36 AM
Oh yeah, this definately promises something!  ^_^ good luck to you both!

Wei Ingnan
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# 9   Posted: Mar 15 2005, 08:37 AM
I am expecting a rainbow of awesomeness outta both of you....

luniara
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# 8   Posted: Mar 14 2005, 10:06 PM
RIGHT SHELDE, RIGHT.

who cares anyhow.

sheldon
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# 7   Posted: Mar 14 2005, 01:37 AM
i know everyone\'s gonna be dissapointed with my entry.

THE FUN STOPS HERE PEOPLE. TIME TO GROW UP.

chunkplex
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# 6   Posted: Mar 13 2005, 10:11 PM
OMG OMG OMG!!! *screams like a little girl*
You Fockers better put up the good or I\'ll personally call a hit on both of yous guys...I know where you live!

Kyosho
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# 5   Posted: Mar 13 2005, 03:20 PM
Stplmstr: OR, you could lose to a hilarious Shelde comic which doesn\'t have Indigo in it at all except for the last panel where a plane falls on him (along those lines...you get the idea). Either way, this outta be good!

luniara
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# 4   Posted: Mar 12 2005, 06:38 PM
FUCK FUCK FUCK! AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME! Sorry Charlie, you\'re funny but. Alex is my lover now. Friggin make it awsome the both of you!!!

Stplmstr
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# 3   Posted: Mar 12 2005, 06:09 PM
Hahaha this is a winning situation for me. Either I win and bragg my ass of for toppling sheld, or I lose to a wiked cool sheld comic that has indigo as a featured character. muhahahahahahaha

as far as winning goes though well.....i guesse id have to say......
I\'M BONED.

sheldon
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# 2   Posted: Mar 11 2005, 11:11 PM
*sigh*........................................fuck.

GOOD LUCK MATEY!! YOU GLORIOUS CUNT!!

jho
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485 comments
# 1   Posted: Mar 11 2005, 06:46 AM
.... go go

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 3 weeks
Ended: Apr 4th, 2005
Votes Cast: 48
Page Views: 1049
Winner: Stplmstr

 

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