Tag Team Magical Girl Death Tournament, Final Round / Scout and Boris vs. Hollow Passion and Wish-Tinged Idle Logic

Tag Team Magical Girl Death Tournament, Final Round — Scout and Boris vs. Hollow Passion and Wish-Tinged Idle Logic

48.8%
904 points
Page 1Page 2Page 3Page 4Page 5Page 6Page 7Page 8

Crit level: No preference

51.2%
950 points
Page 1Page 2Page 3Page 4Page 5Page 6Page 7Page 8Page 9Page 10Page 11

Crit level: No preference



Critiques & Comments
Please register or log in to comment


ArtsandGoodies
Think Tank
icon
171 comments
# 10   Posted: Apr 18 2019, 10:35 PM
Bloom/greg: This was a nice conclusion to your story and the art was good all around. Your style is solid and the backgrounds done well. the only crit I have is I really didn't fully understand logic/passions death, why does logic eating passion result in both of them blowing up? Other than that this was solid and enjoyable.

Verd/Corn: this story was a great step up, the characterization and worldbuilding you did in this was great. My favorite parts are prod's revelation and the quick mention of the stress awakening. Overall this was well done and a good example of show don't tell.The ending was interesting and I like how logic merged with passion and interested to see this Garden of hearts.

Flytee
Artist
icon
3 comments
# 9   Posted: Apr 17 2019, 02:47 AM
ahh what an amazing end to the tourny, I loved both of these comics. The previous comments basically much sum up my feelings in regards to your art/ writing, so I wouldn't repeat them.
I just wanted to say I really enjoyed reading these. :) good luck to both of you!

Verdazin
Artist
icon
1 comment
# 8   Posted: Apr 16 2019, 06:57 AM
I must say to Bloombeard and Gregly, the more I drew Boris and Scout, the less I wanted to kill them. The way you did Passion and Logic managed to capture them in such a simple way. You also channeled Prod's attitude perfectly. XD
It was an honor doing battle with you.

BoogidiBzdo
Artist
icon
17 comments
# 7   Posted: Apr 14 2019, 12:11 PM
@Bloombeard/Gregly: I really like how you make your backgrounds so lively. Page 5 had a very nice action sequence showcasing your opponent's varied attacks. Your visual style is very efficient and everything works well together and this suits your writing style, which I think is really good. Adding the element of the gym being at stake on this final round of the tournament  contributed more anticipation and excitement to the outcome. Good job!

@Verdazin/Corn of the Breads: Very good, smooth line art. The action was very dynamic and well done. All those transformations were cool to see and I could get a good sense of how the power levels escalated throughout this battle. I thought it was interesting about how the newly transformed Hollow Passion  remarked about how pointless all the killing was and the bit about the Garden of Hearts was also intriguing. Well done!

Heathen
Artist
icon
294 comments
# 6   Posted: Apr 14 2019, 12:06 PM
Bloom/Greg: You guys had a solid and consistent run throughout this tourney, and you ended on a funny and satisfying conclusion that leaves plenty of room for these characters to grow.

Verd/Corn: You guys started out a little rocky in round 1, but this comic is a clear step up from that round in every regard. Downing a member of each team and showcasing evolutions for both was a really cool decision, and your ending felt earned and appropriately dramatic.

Good work from both teams in bringing this tourney home on a high note.

William_Duel
Community Manager
icon
917 comments
# 5   Posted: Apr 14 2019, 05:19 AM
Bloomgreg, I loved this.  Very entertaining and lighthearted.  The colors are very nice and eyecatching.  The last page made me laugh.  That was a great joke to end on.  

VerdCorn, it's awesome to see how many pages and how much effort you put in for this final round.  It nails that anime feel quite well.  The character powerups were fun and seeing the final fused form was really cool.  I think throughout the tourney you had some difficulty really developing the characters but we definitely got a lot out of them here at the end.  Great detail work and nice expressions particularly towards the end.

yarnwitch
Think Tank
icon
270 comments
# 4   Posted: Apr 12 2019, 12:50 PM
BLOOMGREG I held my breath and then I LAUGHED. This was amusing and light-hearted even to the end, making light of something so serious with a childish innocence. What a great contrast to your opponent! And how VERY unique to you! I appreciated your paneling/pacing in this especially, there was a lot of subtle things like popping slightly out of frame border that became really helpful in pushing your writing! Loved it!

CORNDAZIN I cried also I'm a sucker for endings like this, I feel like I understood enough of this world's magic system at the end I just. Idk it felt great to read. Some actions could have been smoother. More spotblacks or even shading could have helped with clarity in some spots, but this was wonderful regardless. One of my favorites from y'all.

Bobo
Web Dev
icon
876 comments
# 3   Posted: Apr 12 2019, 12:12 PM
Sorry for the delay in getting this posted!

Corn Of The Breads
Think Tank
icon
131 comments
# 2   Posted: Apr 12 2019, 06:59 AM
Comic complete I hope everyone has as much fun reading it as I did drawing it!

Gregly
Artist
icon
124 comments
# 1   Posted: Apr 11 2019, 09:23 PM
Comic submitted! Who will die??

Comic Details -

 
Type: Death Match
Drawing Time: 2 weeks
Ended: Apr 18th, 2019
Votes Cast: 22
Page Views: 925
Winner: Verdazin and Corn Of The Breads

 

Add to Playlist -

 
 

Newest Comments -


Newest Characters -

 
Ozias KraneNomadMona-LisaWish-Tinged Idle LogicHollow PassionGut SmasherWendigoDahirisDauber PauperPreciousKindervampenCroco
 

Open Challenges -

 
No open challenges
Create a new challenge
 

Random Comic -



Latest Topics -

 
VOID HEAVYWEIGHT 2019 HYPE JAM 
Last updated: JCee - Today at 04:23 AM
ENTERVOID HEAVYWEIGHT TOURNAMENT 2019 
Last updated: Shen - Apr 24, 2019, 11:10 PM
Pinstripe Jam 
Last updated: Pockets - Apr 23, 2019, 10:23 PM
Time to Incubate a egg - PDevil incubator 
Last updated: TheCydork - Apr 23, 2019, 04:58 AM
Official VOID Shitpost Thread! 
Last updated: TheCydork - Apr 23, 2019, 04:52 AM
 

Latest Members -


Users online -

 
73 Guests, 1 User


[]

Most Online Today: 97.
Most Online Ever: 1,050 (Aug 30, 2015, 02:43 AM)

 

Original site Copyright 2002-2017 Kevin Birtcher All characters and content Copyright 2002-2017 their respective owners Theme by SMFTricks - Modified by Brittney Scott & Jordan Bobo