Nothin vs. Mister Kent

Nothin vs. Mister Kent

by Nothin

Nothin
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Mister Kent
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ArtsandGoodies
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# 5   Posted: Sep 19 2018, 09:53 PM
Nothin, I  really enjoy the abstract and silent comic you did this with this was pretty fun. The only thing I could say is that the head of the character should be more consistent color wise. In page one the head has a black border but on pages 2 and 3 it's not there. I think it would have been better if it was more consistent like how in page 5 you have it with a white outline to show the border of the body, also having that outline on page 3 would have been nice to make the body more consistent. Besides that this was a pretty fun abstract comic and I liked how path the character was walking down was constantly changing.

Kent: This is a good page and I like what was going on in it. Rather than wishing for more i would instead have preferred a bit more closure on this. This ended in the middle of the conversation and that makes it feel like another page should be right after. Maybe if the final panel was something like the guy drifting off to sleep that would have had more closure since right now it feels like the page ends at an arbitrary point in the conversation. That being said the dialogue is good and I got a good sense of both of their characters and want to know more about who they are and their relationship.

William_Duel
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# 4   Posted: Sep 16 2018, 07:55 AM
Nothin, I appreciate the ideas behind your comic.  But I feel it could use some more polished execution.  Especially since the comic is so dependent on shapes and patterns as part of it's storytelling.  So I feel there was a real chance to really explore that.  But like the first page is full of shapes that are a bit haphazard.  One look and the linework isn't as polished as it could be.  And while the last page has a mood change indicated by the color, I think it would have been interesting to have the patterns changed to reflect that.  

Mr. Kent, it's a nice page.  Linework needs polishing.  But not much else to say.  

Nothin
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# 3   Posted: Sep 15 2018, 10:56 PM
so i guess if anyone is confused we decided on slice of life as a loose theme

yarnwitch
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# 2   Posted: Sep 2 2018, 12:57 PM
OMG AN ARTIST MATCH IM SUPER EXCITED

Mister Kent
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# 1   Posted: Aug 23 2018, 05:14 AM
YASS so excite

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