Intro Story / Egg Dealer

Intro Story — Egg Dealer

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Crocostyle
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# 13   Posted: Jul 16 2018, 04:04 PM
This character has some seriously un-serious pontential. Ability-wise I could use some more detail about how the egg attacks work.  What does it take to get you turned into an egg?  Does he have to make you inhale egg-gas?  Can he turn you with one touch from the attack eggs?  Or is it based on some sort of spiritual strength gauge?

Comic-wise this is a solid intro. Totally dig the silly shounen parody. I just wish it was hammered in beforehand that this was a generic hero rather than afterward.  Heck he could have been an actual costumed hero, just to show Egg Dealer's power through defeat!  Finally some of the action was confusing, like top of pg 3 looks like eggdealer's eye belongs to the shadowy-figure.  I think a behind-the-head shot would have been better for that panel.

Charlie
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# 12   Posted: Jul 14 2018, 07:36 PM
This is fucking amazing

Kozispoon
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940 comments
# 11   Posted: Jul 14 2018, 12:19 PM
This is the craziest concept and character theme, but I'm here for it. Welcome aboard!

Julz
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# 10   Posted: Jul 13 2018, 01:41 PM
Lol what in the... I'm into it XD

BoogidiBzdo
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# 9   Posted: Jul 12 2018, 09:33 AM
Thank you everyone for such a warm welcome. And thanks yarnwitch for the beautiful fanart, I wasn't expecting something like
that right out of the gate! I really appreciate it.

Reign
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# 8   Posted: Jul 12 2018, 12:10 AM
EGGS!

yarnwitch
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# 7   Posted: Jul 11 2018, 09:45 PM


I love this! Have a fanart!

      Edited Jul 11 2018,  09:46 PM by yarnwitch

Pita
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# 6   Posted: Jul 11 2018, 07:15 PM
You have eggs.  I have a bird-shaped friend.

This match was written in the stars.

yarnwitch
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# 5   Posted: Jul 11 2018, 06:11 PM
Fight me as well please!

The Bent One
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# 4   Posted: Jul 11 2018, 05:15 PM
This is weird and I like it.

Energy
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# 3   Posted: Jul 11 2018, 05:05 PM
Welcome!

Desichan
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# 2   Posted: Jul 11 2018, 04:41 PM
wELCOME HAPPY TO HAVE YOU FRIEND!!!!

Shen
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# 1   Posted: Jul 11 2018, 04:26 PM
You finally got in, congrats! FIGHT ME, I'M SERIOUS

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