Rebirth of the Dark Messiah -prelude to SRT 2018- / Hyperion

Rebirth of the Dark Messiah -prelude to SRT 2018- — Hyperion

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AJ 武士龍
Artist

66 comments

# 6 Posted: Jul 15 2018, 11:28 AM

Thanks to all who critiqued and voted, and the ones who invested their high expectations in the following of this comic!
Appreciated!

Special thanks to @TheBentOne!

Reign
Artist

208 comments

# 5 Posted: Jul 11 2018, 11:19 PM

only real gripe I have is that I wish it was coloured like the first page throughout the strip, other than that good to see more super hero villain types back in VOID

Heathen
Artist

264 comments

# 4 Posted: Jul 9 2018, 10:47 PM

This gives me life.

Minor crits, do better lettering. You very clearly know what a comic book is supposed to look like, so I think it's fair to hold your lettering to a higher standard. Also, spell check.

In conclusion, fuck yeah.

Edited Jul 9 2018, 10:48 PM by Heathen

Corn Of The Breads
Think Tank

130 comments

# 3 Posted: Jul 9 2018, 03:57 PM

I really enjoyed the artstyle it definitely did its job and amped me up for the future tournament!

Hellis
Artist

188 comments

# 2 Posted: Jul 9 2018, 10:58 AM

Oh man. This felt like OG void stuff. The narrative heavy stuff is working for me on every level. But consider your textplacement more carefully, you have soem text that overlaps effects and it make it hard to read. But man, I am happy to see Hyperion. ANd I am glad to see something that dares to be monologue heavy.