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Intro Story — Sebastian


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DaniBot
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# 9   Posted: Apr 23 2018, 09:18 PM
I feel like I'm repeating everyone, but Sebastian's intro has a nice lighthearted feel. Everything was well colored. It's interesting to know that he has a bounty on him and I can't wait to read more about him.

ArtsandGoodies
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# 8   Posted: Apr 23 2018, 08:38 PM
I really like the art on this. There is something about the way you did Sebastian but he always seems stand out in the panels he's in even when he's around similar colored stuff like the giant creature.It also kind of looks like stills from an animation which is really cool.

Happy December 17th! -Reecer6
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# 7   Posted: Apr 19 2018, 06:21 PM
Yooo, I love the light-hearted jolly adventure tone of this. Sebastian seems like a super fun character!

Your coloring is as on point as always and I absolutely love how the background is lined much more loosely with a softer pen to keep the characters distinct but still have it feel relatively sharp.

Kozispoon
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# 6   Posted: Apr 17 2018, 10:48 AM
Void is reaching further and further into space. I'm digging the recent influx of galactic goodniks. :D
Great intro comic! I'll admit, while the amusingly awkward heroism comes across, I feel I didnt really get to know this character via the intro comic. I got to know the world and group of baddies more I think which are super cool.
Also, if i can nitpick, the lineless style is something I think will look good given more practice, but when laid out next to your super sharp inks, your linesless works roughness and semi sloppy moments really stand out.

Pocketmouse
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# 5   Posted: Apr 16 2018, 10:33 PM
So neat!! You've built an interesting world in only four pages, on top of showing a new character which is wonderful. I can't wait to see if you continue to expand on this galaxy in any battles.

The only niggle I had when reading was the panel break, as I wasn't sure what it was exactly, and it may have been more symbolic to have the features nose and some broken glass be what's breaking the panel.

This was a great read and your art looks lovely here so great job! Here's to seeing more Seb soon!

Desichan
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# 4   Posted: Apr 16 2018, 10:48 AM
WHAT A CUTE SQUISHY ALIEN YOU HAVE HERE!

Good comic!!! Can't wait to see Sebastian in more comics!

Heathen
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# 3   Posted: Apr 16 2018, 08:19 AM
A great lighthearted intro. I was hoping he’d have to escape the jaws of the beast, though, to show that he’s willing to protect an animal that may not be capable of appreciating his efforts, and to add some more suspense to the scene. It would have made the beast snapping him up in the middle of his speech even funnier, too, giving him a more hapless hero vibe.

I really like the designs throughout this comic, and especially Sebastian’s celestial Spanish conquistador look.

Hellis
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# 2   Posted: Apr 16 2018, 08:10 AM
Everything about his design is super tight. Its such a nice and clean look with a very unique feel to it. Loving the pages as well.

yarnwitch
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# 1   Posted: Apr 16 2018, 08:07 AM
I love this dude! Good job getting him in!

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