Intro Story / Eros

Intro Story — Eros

by umbriel


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Flutterbyes
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# 14   Posted: Feb 10 2018, 08:44 PM
Oooh, nice, nice, overall streamlined with its moments where the characters are more rendered for beauty and punch... A good introduction for the family and the vampire concept, though I'm not sure I know who Eros is from this comic. But I still want to know. I do agree that there are a LOT of closeups, but this intro did cover a lot of intimate situations, so... I guess it worked out.

Corn Of The Breads
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# 13   Posted: Feb 10 2018, 09:53 AM
The art is superb and I love a classic dark gothic vampire, my one criticism would be dont be afraid to pull the camera back. A lot of the shots feel like they are from the same distance. Showing a character put weight in the world helps make them feel more grounded and have more impact upon the world sometimes. Overall I really enjoy how intimate this comic feels and the rendering great job!

umbriel
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# 12   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 05:55 PM
Thanks everyone! I had no idea what I was doing at first but I'm glad it turned out all right LOL I'm still new to everything so I appreciate every feedback! :)

Radji
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# 11   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 11:54 AM
claasic erotic vampire he? ME GUSTA

Alouisse Ver
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# 10   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 10:51 AM
The BOY IS HEEEEEEEERE!!!!! So glad you've joined, and I can't wait to see what you do!

We gotta collab sometime once the other half of suq joins. So we can get the club GOING.

Monday
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# 9   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 06:43 AM
Welcome to Void. :^)

 

fukur0
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# 8   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 04:06 AM
bout time you got this ho in

let me pop your battle cherry ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)

Hellis
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# 7   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 02:43 AM
This was pretty great. Hitlisted so hard

Cracking Skulls
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# 6   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 01:31 AM
auto hitlisted can't wait see more from yoooouuuuu!

Mister Kent
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# 5   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 01:14 AM
LOVE the style, colors, story - can't wait to see more from you and Eros!

:( I wish my Dipuc or Todd Susser were alive to fight him. It'd all be too perfect

JayKat
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# 4   Posted: Feb 4 2018, 12:43 AM
I'm SO happy to see him in ~
Can't wait to see him in action soon ~

DaniBot
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# 3   Posted: Feb 3 2018, 06:42 PM
I've been waiting to read this! I love him so much.

SirJellyRaptor
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# 2   Posted: Feb 3 2018, 06:37 PM
Well I'd say this about sets the scene perfectly. He'll fit right in

Shen
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# 1   Posted: Feb 3 2018, 06:32 PM
Hes beautiful i love him fight my werewolf

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