Oh woe is worm / Wictor and Niles Khairi

Oh woe is worm — Wictor and Niles Khairi


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PyrasTerran
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# 6   Posted: Mar 13 2018, 08:54 AM
I didn't get a chance to say this earlier but Wirecat the forest Wiktor comic you did is one of my favorites of the year and it absolutely sold me to the character and his world. This new comic continues strong character writing with these guys, but the biggest gripe i have is that it's way too dark; i had to strain my eyes to see half the time, I think you should have gone ahead and given us heavier contrasts of light and shadow to give us the shape of Wiktor throughout. If he's got phantablack properties like miller and fear then at least a halo effect for his silhouette would have done wonders for legibility

Rhimwill
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# 5   Posted: Mar 12 2018, 05:34 PM
This is super cute and I'm really enjoying this weird friendship between these two. The comedic timing in this is spot-on XD

      Edited Mar 12 2018,  05:36 PM by Rhimwill

zee
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# 4   Posted: Mar 12 2018, 04:33 PM
So stoked to see you guys working together.  
I will say (though I do love dark colors) there wasn't quite enough color contrast here, which left a lot of the scenes too dark to properly follow, but this is just something to keep in mind for future comics.
This was a nice little interaction overall; both of the characters have such seemingly volatile personalities I was surprised by the relative peacefulness of it, ha ha.

Wonderful job you two, can't wait for more from you both!

Dylerium
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# 3   Posted: Mar 9 2018, 04:21 PM
That was cute and goofy and how all the colors blended together nicely with even the night having a slight orange to match Niles' orange was a nice touch!

Alouisse Ver
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# 2   Posted: Mar 8 2018, 11:05 AM
With all the large-scale events and deaths going on in Void, I love comics like these that focus on just simple character interactions and events. A look into an ordinary day in the life of a Void citizen.

I enjoy this introduction of how Niles and Wictor meet. Their banter is cute and amusing. This is a great stepping stone for what I'm sure will be more interactions and adventures for the two of them. Of which I can't wait to see!

My only points of critique are that the comic is dark. I'd love it if it was just brightened up a tad, OR if the colorist pushed the lightsource a bit more so that it would illuminate the figures and some of the background more.

All in all, great comic, and I can't wait to see more! You two work well together.

Desichan
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# 1   Posted: Mar 7 2018, 08:51 PM
I really enjoyed seeing these two's banter, and I really enjoyed all that random touching, when Niles is just like... "Huh." It was neat, and a fun read!! Glad to see more of these kiddos!

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Ended: Mar 13th, 2018
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