Wacky Races 2, Round 2 / Crikey Dile vs. Click Lyric

Wacky Races 2, Round 2 — Crikey Dile vs. Click Lyric

by Golden


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Kozispoon
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# 14   Posted: Oct 10 2017, 08:18 PM
GOLDEN- Its both hilarious and makes me feel bad this comic seems to be reflecting your life. Will she make it? I certainly hope so! Tournaments are tough, but kudos for sticking with it and fighting through, lady.

petarvee
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# 13   Posted: Oct 8 2017, 06:43 PM
@Goldie
*Adorable as always* I know this was a bit of a time crunch for you, but honestly, I woulda never known. You've hit your stride in the chibi comics and wield them well, and for that I'm very proud.

Overall, your comic does it's job in defeating your opponent in a clever way. But, in an ideal world, I woulda loved more interaction between the two.

My only sorta nitpick overall would be the use of the mushroom. I mean I can fill in what it's supposed to do because Mario Kart Logic, but without having it spelled out clearly: Click uses it, and immediately plummets downward. Through that lens, it makes it read like sort of a useless thing, or, something he shoulda/woulda used on Crikey. Just things to consider. Spellin out the whackadoo stuff that pops up before ya use it is part-and-parcel for anything cartoonish, and just a good thing to remember.

Keep doin whatcha doin and keep givin me Dat CJ.

Happy October 19th! -Reecer6
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# 12   Posted: Oct 8 2017, 06:32 PM
I know I critiqued the other three comics all at once and then took like four days to get to this one but DON'T WORRY ABOUT THAT

Golden: It's unfortunate you didn't really get to match the length of your previous round this time, but I suppose different stories do just call for an appropriate amount of content! That said, I don't feel like Click was properly defeated in this. He ran away, but it seems a bit assumptive to hold that he would withdraw from the contest, so I don't think it was quite a definitive end? Besides that though, this composition was TOP NOTCH.

Tech: Teeeeeeeeeeecccccchhhhhhhhhhhh! ;_;

yarnwitch
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# 11   Posted: Oct 8 2017, 11:09 AM
@golden the dinner bit really got me. I love it!
i'm a sucker for texture, but i wish there was a little more variety since you were using it. wonderful comic! I can't wait to see Crikey in the finals!

JayKat
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# 10   Posted: Oct 3 2017, 07:27 PM
Goldie - I get that you were pressed for time, so I won't harp on anything here. But definitely very that happy you gave us something. I'm really digging this chibi style you're going for, cute and simple and it gets the story across just fine. I wish you lots of luck next round!

Tech - Awww man : (

Wolfbaloo
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# 9   Posted: Oct 2 2017, 09:59 PM
I really enjoyed seeing Crikey in this one. Wished it was longer but again: Sometimes being pressed for time doesn't do well. But regardless this turned out pretty well.

PyrasTerran
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# 8   Posted: Oct 2 2017, 02:26 PM
A bit sloppier than the previous one but it's so cute and I really like the scenario, good luck in the final round!

Shen
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# 7   Posted: Oct 2 2017, 10:15 AM
Goldie! this was a bit rushed but we both know you were pressed for time so Im glad you finished what you did! the art style youre doing for this tourney looks great, efficient but adorable! And the sky backdrop lets you get away with sort of faking the backgrounds haha. I dont fully understand what happened at the end, what exactly did the mushroom do? sorry you didnt have more time to polish this but what you made do with came out great!
tech: dude what happen

Desichan
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# 6   Posted: Oct 2 2017, 08:30 AM
Golden, just wanna say, I actually really like your art, I loved how you drew the characters and the planes, but something about this felt like it was missing. I feel like this comic really could've benefited from backgrounds that had a bit more complexity to them but I still by all means really liked seeing how your comic turned out! The plane you drew, really reads well, which seems like a pretty complex thing to get right if you ask me, and I love the way you draw characters! Good luck on the next round!

And yowch, sorry to hear you defaulted Technicolor, I bet whatever you were going to make would've been really amazing! It's a shame that we didn't get to see it though.

Bobo
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# 5   Posted: Sep 25 2017, 05:17 PM
THE GODS HAVE ANSWERED OUR PRAYERS

Kozispoon
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# 4   Posted: Sep 25 2017, 03:35 PM
This is the match we all didn't expect but we all wanted =00 I expect fantabulous comics I'll have a horrible time voting for, you guys <3

Pita
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# 3   Posted: Sep 24 2017, 05:55 PM
CROIKY, LOOK AT THIS MATCH-UP

JayKat
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# 2   Posted: Sep 24 2017, 05:53 PM
Awww snap!

This gonna be gooood ~

Shen
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# 1   Posted: Sep 24 2017, 05:51 PM
crocodile vs rabbit~

Comic Details -

 
Type: Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Oct 8th, 2017
Votes Cast: 24
Page Views: 350
Winner: Golden

 

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