The Plot Thickens, Part II / Stanley Martin

The Plot Thickens, Part II — Stanley Martin


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Shen
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# 5   Posted: Jul 21 2017, 08:34 AM
I like the use of songs to indicate the time passing, and Im interested to see where the story goes from here! Like Red said its not as charming as part 1 but its still got a certain, horrific appeal. I feel like there was more you could do to push the shock factor on the last page, though im not entirely sure what. maybe a more dynamic camera angle? Still, happy to see you continuing this!

Prometheusd
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# 4   Posted: Jul 19 2017, 06:00 PM
Thanks for the feedback so far. I had fun drawing some of the scenes in this one, but found that the brush pen wasn't cooperating like I wanted it to at some points. I'll have to keep practicing and maybe incorporate some other types of pens for inking.

Red: As far as the artwork, by beefing up do you mean more background detail or line quality?
Pyras: Yeah, I need to find a more fitting font, I agree.


      Edited Jul 19 2017,  06:01 PM by Prometheusd

Red
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# 3   Posted: Jul 16 2017, 10:42 PM
Part II is lacking the charm of part I tbh, I'm glad you're building backstory but you need to work on beefing up that art too. Pyras mentioned the font, but I feel like you could have put a little more care into the comic overall? Looking forward to what you do next and I still think that Part I was super great. This was just a little lacking for me.

PyrasTerran
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# 2   Posted: Jul 16 2017, 10:19 PM
I would suggest a better font and the art is getting better if needing more work but MAN I am completely hooked on this fever dream of a plot

More please

JayKat
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# 1   Posted: Jul 1 2017, 08:40 PM
YEEEES!

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