We could be FRIENDS / Zita the Ragdoll vs. Satari

We could be FRIENDS — Zita the Ragdoll vs. Satari

by Radji


368 points
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by G.Lo


319 points
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Julz
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# 3   Posted: Feb 23 2017, 09:41 AM
Finally got around to reading these.

RADJI- Very messy and lazy looking but somehow it still works because it captures the panicky mood you've got going with Zita and her horrible visions. I really feel for Zita, there is a LOT of emotion packed into this little sack girl.

GLO- your page 3 has really weird pacing and composition. For example panel 2's word bubbling was confusing then immediately after, the next bubble doesn't even finish the sentence. If the idea is that he's trailing off, you gotta give us clues like add some blah blahs or something. Then in the next panel Zita cuts the guy off, and I can't follow these conversations. They are all snippets and I quickly lose interest. 4th panel the would you watch zita bubble is sitting on her head and also touching the border panel. I DO HOWEVER LIKE the direction with the realization that the shots are tricking her mind, that's a cool twist.

Radji
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# 2   Posted: Feb 19 2017, 09:07 AM
G.Lo: Radji I'm sorry I dropped the ball on this one, and I totally owe you a comic!!
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's okay, i understand

G.Lo
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# 1   Posted: Feb 19 2017, 07:23 AM
Radji I'm sorry I dropped the ball on this one, and I totally owe you a comic!! Some pages are finished but yeah... I definitely should have waited a little before doing another battle :/

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Drawing Time: 4 weeks
Ended: Feb 26th, 2017
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