Original Character Tournament, Round 1 / Jackie vs. The Outlawer

Original Character Tournament, Round 1 — Jackie vs. The Outlawer

by Barrel


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Rhimwill
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# 6   Posted: Jan 16 2017, 04:50 PM
Barrel: I admire how much effort you put into the backgrounds and environments for this given the tight deadline. I did get a little confused when Jackie's other hand is sabotaging the Outlawer's gun - the hand is so small and tucked up in the top of the panel that I failed to notice it on the first read-through. You've done a good job setting up Jackie's story in this, both with the hit-list and the moral dilemma that you hinted at with Jackie's words to Outlawer at the end. Can't wait to see where you take the story next round!

Camel
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# 5   Posted: Jan 15 2017, 11:24 PM
a shame william, better luck next time

Barrel - Jackie is real cool, love his attitude, also quite fond of your lineart. i'd say that next round you should play more with the "negative space" idea because that has a lot of potential, and maybe go for a more vibrant palette.

Shen
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# 4   Posted: Jan 14 2017, 07:21 PM
brrel, very cool, your guy's a badass! I love his design and that silouette near the end! take care with these monochromatic comics that jackie stands out against the BG, even in thumbnails like this it's best if he pops out. its too early to get much into the story arc so ill save that for another round Welcome back to void! Great first round!

willy D =(

Futreblot
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# 3   Posted: Jan 10 2017, 11:42 AM
oh no! the outlawer, out in round one by default? :<
still Barrel, what a fantastic comic! If I make it past round one I hope we meet on the battle field.

Radji
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# 2   Posted: Jan 10 2017, 11:21 AM
Barrel, you lil guy is badass. like cowboy behop baddass. i so hope i get to battle him !

William_Duel
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# 1   Posted: Jan 9 2017, 08:14 PM
I'm so sorry but I'll be defaulting this round.  I'm interested in finishing my comic though so I'll put it up after voting is over.

Comic Details -

 
Type: Speed Death Tournament Match
Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jan 16th, 2017
Votes Cast: 29
Page Views: 361
Winner: Barrel

 

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