Genie vs. Kars

Genie vs. Kars


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KarmaLarma
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# 10   Posted: Jun 15 2016, 09:54 PM
Minteh: I totally struggled writing the lines on this one so I get what you mean. It was hard picking between exposition and goofs, haha. I'll work on keeping it concise.

Pyras: Thanks! I think I'm getting better at using my time, now if I could just get of scheduling comic time.

Shen: Ah, I thought I made it clear with Kars' lines but I guess it didn't come across. Oops! The woman is an ancestor of Genie's, hence it being the "Adventure era" and Genie questioning how he can be sure that they're related at all. Part of the joke was her looking just like her great great so and so that Kars met ages ago, hehe. But thank you!

Also TDK your side was really funny! I'm glad you decided to use Genie's profession since I haven't made a lot of use of it even though it's part of her character. It was a really nice attention to detail on her hehe.

      Edited Jun 15 2016,  09:55 PM by KarmaLarma

Shen
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# 9   Posted: Jun 15 2016, 09:43 PM
karma- at first i totally thought this was Kars and Genie meeting in the past, since he was pre-scars and all, otherwise im a bit confused on the timeline i guess, it took him a very long time to get the instrument to her! so now im not really sure who the other blonde woman is, unless it IS Genie and doesnt remember? Either way I liked it, i loved the gold and purples, and it was funny too! Great work in a short time!

TDK KARS SHOULD BE FIRED LMAO who let this man teach high school girls!! XD it looks a bit unfinished, i think it could have done with some heavy blacks in places to make the characters stand out more but theres some creative monsters in here, and i laughed a lot at the end, for three days this is a good entry!

PyrasTerran
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# 8   Posted: Jun 15 2016, 11:47 AM
Karma: This is great use of the short time you had! I honestly can't think of anything major to bring up, great job and keep this up!

tdk: welcome to the digital world! This is a funny and cool story but the art feels unfinished because of the lighter black used for the lines and the lack of shades/gray/colors, but as you get faster hopefully you'll get a chance to fill this stuff in next time


Minteh
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# 7   Posted: Jun 15 2016, 08:40 AM
Karma: huge congrats and I am completely in awe of your ability to colour these pages so nicely in three days. I will say that the text got a little long-winded for me. I do feel like with the story you were telling it was probably difficult to decide what to cut and what to leave? Overall it was enjoyable and you got a laugh outta me with your punchline, great work!

TDK: Your inks are looking good here! I do think you probably could've condensed this one into two pages instead of three, which would've given you some extra time to maybe push it past the inking stage, but the story you wrote and told is hilarious here.  I'm sure Kars is a great teacher when it comes to magic, but I worry for him if lady vanity finds out he gave a bunch of young female students underwear (bikini bottoms?) as a gift hahahaa

Radji
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# 6   Posted: Jun 13 2016, 07:54 AM
coincidence? hmmm
I THINK NOT
Kars, you devious, devious teacher

KarmaLarma
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48 comments
# 5   Posted: Jun 12 2016, 11:26 PM
Uploaded! lD I cut it way too close, but I gots to get my full color on!

Ten Dead Kings
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266 comments
# 4   Posted: Jun 12 2016, 11:20 AM
Uploaded.

And apologies in advance to everyone because I write bad jokes on a pressure deadline haha.

Kozispoon
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936 comments
# 3   Posted: Jun 9 2016, 09:52 PM
Another match up of artists I both want to win. I hate this- you're tearing me apart you's guys!

Shen
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1194 comments
# 2   Posted: Jun 9 2016, 03:13 PM
oh fun! this should be a good match!

mortooncian
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# 1   Posted: Jun 9 2016, 02:56 PM
OH? :''D

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Drawing Time: 1 week
Ended: Jun 15th, 2016
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