Intro Story / Cambriel

Intro Story — Cambriel

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Thresher
Artist

166 comments

# 7 Posted: May 1 2016, 04:30 AM

ANGELS VS LOVECRAFT?
I AM HERE FOR THIS

daletronzero

1 comment

# 6 Posted: May 1 2016, 02:14 AM

CONGRADS ON THE NEW CHARACTER JULZ!

Radji
Artist

624 comments

# 5 Posted: May 1 2016, 01:26 AM

can't resist...
CAM USED LIGHT ATTACK
IT'S SUPER EFFECTIVE !

Dechado
Artist

255 comments

# 4 Posted: Apr 30 2016, 05:39 PM

Nah, nothing wrong with crotch shots. I just thought it was weird/something different for an agendered character.

Julz
Artist

411 comments

# 3 Posted: Apr 30 2016, 05:27 PM

Are my pages too big?? Ahh panic mode!! Sorry for all the crotch. Theres nothin there so i thought itd be fine haha

Dechado
Artist

255 comments

# 2 Posted: Apr 30 2016, 05:13 PM

Welcome to VOID.
I like your angelf character. (And would definetely like to battle my demon character against them) But that's a lot of crotch-shots for someone who hasn't a defined gender. Not sure if that is going to be a running gag or not.

Also, for future pages, I hope they can be smaller, because it's hard to read images this big.

[EDIT]
I also just realized this is you Julz and, in fact, not a new VOID member.

Why am I adding any critique to you Julz.
Bad elge, bad.

Radji
Artist

624 comments

# 1 Posted: Apr 30 2016, 12:12 PM

so an underdog with a sentient weapon and light-oriented attacks. something teel me that this guy is a good guy ^^
seriously tho, good fantasy character, with a lot of improvement room! can can do many things with him/her in the future